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Hey you guys! Here’s an excerpt from this new story I’m writing. I haven’t fully thought of the plot yet, so this is just an excerpt from what I have written to see what you guys think! Thanks!
A mask of ecstacy, so complete and true it was a wonder the wearer was not shamed, became permanent with a single click of the button. There was a brief flash of light, a mechanical whir of a shutter, and the sound of a man dancing around tumbles of cords for a new place. He knelt before the posing couple, his coos of approval barely noticed by the two and seemed to be the only one affected by the clasp of light that captured their almost natural movements. He blinked once, twice, and resumed his insistent clicking.
As one, his subjects shifted and paused before, almost daintily, finding a new position with ease. As one, they challenged and submitted to each other, mirroring the very dichotomy of their staged relationship-a never ending battle that ended in both of their favors.
“Last frame,” the photographer informed them, although they barely seemed to have heard him.
Swift male fingers sank into hair the color of mocha, pulling a soft, delicate mouth upward to meet sinfully full lips. His tongue slicked over the young woman’s lips before delving deep into her awaiting mouth. The light flashed in a finishing crescendo, and the couple relaxed in victory.
Yes, I know it’s short, but please tell me how you thought of it! It would be appreciated! Thanks!