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Well this is my first chapter story. My best friend, soccerfreak18 and me wrote this, so please try to be nice. Constructive criticism and flames are welcome but if you must flame please explain why you are doing so lol. Last but not least, ENJOY! :D R&R!
Character Introductions:
Mitchel- 5’ 9 1/2”
Mitchel is sixteen years old he has shaggy brown hair and hazel eyes. The majority of the girl population has a crush on him. He is well built and very popular but doesn’t have a girlfriend.
Blake- 5’ 10”
Blake is sixteen years old he has shaggy black hair and blue eyes. He and Mitchel have been best friends since they were eleven years old. The girls like him but not as much as Mitchel. He is also well built and currently single.
Danny- 5’ 11”
Danny is also sixteen years old he has spiked up brown hair with gold highlights and green eyes. He met the other two when they were all fourteen and became best friends with them. The girls also swoon over him like Blake. He too is well built and single.
Brianna- 5’ 6 1/2”
Brianna is sixteen years old she has straight brown hair that goes past her shoulders and brown eyes. She went to Mineral View High during her freshman year, she was popular, but at the end of term she got an invitation to do an exchange program with a student in Britain. Her junior year she got to come back. She had a boyfriend during her freshman year but she caught him cheating on her and broke up with him.
Angel- 5’ 7 1/2”
Angel is sixteen years old she has brown hair at her shoulders and green eyes. She has been best friends with Brianna since they were eight years old and was devastated when Brianna went to Britain for the year. She does not know that Brianna is coming back. She is single, but doesn’t mind.
Christy- 5’ 8”
Christy is sixteen years old she has dirty blonde hair at her mid arm and blue eyes. She has been best friends with Brianna and Angel since they were thirteen years old. She also does not know about Brianna coming back. She too is without a boyfriend and happy.
You’re Back?
It was the first day of school at Mineral View High. Brianna drove through the semi-familiar parking lot, memories both good and bad flooding her mind. Eventually the girl found a spot and made her way to the counselor’s office of her old school. Her counselor was ready and waiting with her schedule which Brianna took all to eagerly hoping beyond hope that the people she most wanted to see were in her classes.
Christy and Angel placed themselves in a secluded corner where they could compare schedules with no interruptions; they had every class together, to say the very least they were content.
Unlike the girls Blake, Danny, and Mitchel had not found safety in a corner, they were being bombarded with many flirtatious girls; it was kind of annoying, but nonetheless they had every class together too.
One girl in particular surrounding the boys, Destiny, can’t take a hint; she’s been after Mitchel since freshman year convinced that he’s “The One”. She’s a bit of a snob always strutting around like she owned the school. Some guys thought she was pretty but others saw the real her and thought differently. Blonde hair and blue eyes, all American looks but she ruins it with the load of make-up she wears. Her comrades, Faith and Hope, are an exact replica of their leader; they don’t know the meaning of originality. They have their eyes set on the other two men in Mitchel’s group, Destiny had made it very clear that he was heir’s and heir’s alone.
Brianna gazed at the paper in her hand then to the plaque by the door double-checking she was in the right place she then leisurely walked in the room looking around for any familiar faces. Mitchel tore his gaze away from his fans to look at the door seeing a beautiful girl about his age standing there looking somewhat lost, it obviously wasn’t the teacher like he had originally thought. It was like love at first sight or something, angels were singing as they met each other’s gaze a bright light seemed to appear above Mitchel’s head or maybe it was just her imagination. When their eyes connected it was like magic, never had such emotion run through him than when he looked at the beauty in the doorway. Brianna wanted to pull away so that she could view the other occupants in the room but wasn’t able to break the connection.
Mitchel was not the only one who saw the girl standing there. Angel looked at Christy a questioning look coming across both their faces. “Is that…” Christy nodded her head unable to speak. “BRIANNA!” The two screamed at their best friend. They raced out of their seats pulling Brianna into a tight hug. They all sat down in the same corner they occupied seconds before and began to question her about her presence.
“Why didn’t you tell us you were coming back?” Christy asked her ocean blue eyes wide with delight.
“I wanted to surprise you guys.” Brianna answered shrugging her shoulders and smiling apologetically to her best friends.
“This is awesome, we can be a triple threat again.” Angel leaned over hugging her best friend again, “We have soccer tryouts today after school. Coach is going to go ballistic when she finds out you’re back. This is going to be the best year ever.”
“Damn straight, that’s awesome.” Brianna smiled remembering the good ol days playing soccer with her best friends. She couldn’t help her wandering eyes as they traveled over to where Mitchel was sitting she couldn’t help the growing curiosity. “Who’s that?” She pointed towards the boys at Mitchel.
“Hey Mitchel com—“ before Christy could finish Brianna cut her off.
“What the hell are you doing? You weren’t supposed to tell him to come here!” Brianna grimaced at her friend’s actions. “Ugh, too late now.” She looked the other way trying to avoid those hazel eyes.
Mitchel heard his name and was only too pleased to move away from the surrounding girls. Destiny was seething with rage, she had been working on him forever and this new girl comes and throws everything down the drain, she was not having this. She turned to her friends to conspire. “Something must be done about her, about them. They are stealing our men.” She growled with utmost hate while giving the objects of their conversation death glares, if looks could kill, the group would be six-feet under.
Mitchel and the boys reached the girls the second the teacher walked in and stole the empty seats around the “good” girls. The teacher read them the rules then let them talk for the rest of class. Angel turned to Mitchel, “Mitchel, Brianna. Brianna, Mitchel.”
“Hi.” Brianna said a blush creeping onto her face.
“Hi.” Mitchel opened his mouth about to speak when the bell rang ask her something but the bell rang. The two groups said their goodbyes and left their own classes.
Danny turned to Mitchel smirking, “It’s a good thing your friends with her friends.”
“I have no idea what you’re talking about.”
“Sure, and your blushing like mad because?” Mitchel hit Danny on the shoulder to shut him up then walked into their next class but little did they know the girls along with Destiny, Faith, and Hope had the same class. The boys sat in the seats closest to Brianna’s crew. Destiny saw this and was quick to act. She stood in front of Mitchel’s desk and “accidently” dropped her pencil. When she bent over all they could see was butt, it was truly disgusting; she was wearing the shortest skirt allowed in dress code.
“Ahh! Dude! Cover that thing! No one wants to see your ass hanging out!” Brianna yelled shielding her eyes. The rest of the group laughed obnoxiously at her joke.
Destiny didn’t think it was funny at all. “You little bitch! Humph.” She stuck her nose into the air walking the way back to her seat with as much dignity as she could muster.
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Destiny, Faith, and Hope decided they wanted to watch “their” boys tryout for soccer that afternoon.
That week Destiny would try to put Brianna down shooting her mean comments, like on Thursday it was, “You’re so bad at soccer you’ll never make the team.” Sometimes she would also knock Brianna’s things from her hands but when that happened Mitchel would just help her pick everything up. This of course, made Destiny stop doing that. On Friday the sextet walked down to the gym and found out that they all had made their soccer team.
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So what did you think? You like it or hate it? Should I continue? Only one way to know…REVIEW! I promise the next chapter will be better as well as the story! I just really wanted to introduce the main characters first. I would like at least 3 reviews before chapter 2 but its up to you so can you review? Haha that rhymed…