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Author: Hope.flies
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Horror - Reviews: 13 - Published: 06-11-08 - Updated: 06-23-08 - Complete - id:2530455

Ok, here is another chapter ready for you guys!! Hope you love it!!

One day later

“My people, please rise,” said the Speaker as Magnus and I walked to the front of the room.

I was dressed in a blood red dress with black sleeves and black patterns. It was very gorgeous and made me look ever more beautiful than the one I wore when I first actually saw Magnus.

Magnus was wearing a black suit with a blood red tie. He looked absolutely breath taking in it. Around his shoulders was a blood red velvet cloak with gold fastings. I had one exactly like it around my shoulder too.

Around my head was a small gold crown. It looked like it was made like a daisy crown, only with gold roses. Where the center rose would be was a red gem, the only other color on it. But it looked absolutely amazing.

Magnus was wearing an eight-pointed gold crown, with each point having a very small red gem. The front point had a much larger gem.

We slowly walked down the isle in the very same auditorium as when we were declared a matched pair. We walked through a sword tunnel, where our victorious guards stood, clad in a deep red suit with metals on it. Of course, this was only their ceremonies suit, and of course, they wore it today. When we reached the front of the building, the priest said to Magnus, then I, “Do you solemnly swear that you will do whatever you can in your power for the better of Vampires?” after we placed our right hand on our Holy Book of Neptune and held hands with the priest using our left hand individually. Of course, we both said, “Yes, I solemnly swear to only use my powers for the better of the Vampire race.”

After that, we were to turn around and face our people. The guards had sheathed their swords and were now facing front.

The grand doors opened. Down came the isle in very plain, but very attractive black dresses, were the crown protectors. The two female Vampires put all their lives into fixing, shining, restoring and protecting the crowns. Magnus and I held hands as the two came up to us.

The priest took off Magnus’s crown first then placed it on the red velvet pillow of the waiting temporary crown protectors. They were merely here for today to help bring the crowns back.

After that he picked up Magnus’ new crown and placed it on his head.

His had the same base as his prince crown, but on this one, there was a velvet top with rose steams as pillars leading up to the center which was a single red colored gold rose.

Then it was my turn. My heart was pounding with anticipation and nerves. What would happen? How heavy was the new crown? What will mine look like?

I soon found out. When my crown was lifted from my head, and the Priest picked up the only other crown, I saw its base also looked exactly like my old crown. Only, it also had a red velvet top and behind every other rose was a gold rose steam that followed the velvet up to the center where it met a smaller, not completely bloomed but still breath taking red colored gold rose.

When it was placed on my head, I found that I had worn hats much heavier than this. However, I did not completely like the feel. I was used to my old crown as princess, not this big Queen’s crown.

However , soon my thoughts were interrupted as the Speaker said, “My fellow brothers and sister, I bring you your new king and queen, King Magnus and Queen Caila of England. Please rise in their honor.”

I was beaming. Because I was told to not ever look at Magnus while I was up on the stage until it was time for the Sacred Kiss, I could only guess that he looked as proud as I was.

If only Lucius could see his son and daughter now. He’d be so very proud I thought to myself. And it was true. He’d probably be shedding some tears at the sight of us, being crowned King and Queen of all Vampires.

But then, after twenty seconds (we were told to could to twenty slowly until we could look at each other again) I turned to face Magnus. His face held absolute power and courage. He looked so proud. And his eyes gleamed as they caught sight of me in my new crown. I then grasped his other hand. We then began inching our faces forward at the same time until we shared a Vampire kiss again.

It was wonderful. Amazing. Insane. Crazy. Out-of-this-world good. And I knew Magnus and I would again share in our lives many, many more Vampire kisses.

Ok, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR REVIEWS!! I LUV YOU GUYS LIKE GOLD FISH!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!

OK KEEP READING!!

As you saw before, I have several other stories up. If you've only read VK 2, then you might wanna give Vampire Kisses a chance. I've also written The Storm, something i still need to transfer edits to, according to my lonely reviewer (which i'll be doing soon! I promise!!). I've also written The Follower, which is my shortest story, but i am most proud of. I also love it!! My other story that i've written is Wolf Tales, but i need to badly edit that, change a few things, ESCPECAILLY the ending, but luckily, i have yet to post another chapter...And yes, its been a while...During this summer, I promise i will continue posting/editing/rewriting!!

Now, the moment you've been waiting for!! -drum roll- THERE WILL BE A SEQUAL TO THIS AND A THIRD INSTALLMENT TO THE VAMPIRE KISSES SERIES!! THE SOON TO BE POSTED Vampire Kisses 3: Danger and Love. HOPE YOU GUYS LOVE IT, READ IT AND ENJOY IT!! THIS IS LIZZA SIGNING OFF FROM VAMPIRE KISSES 2: THE CROWNING!!

-Lizza



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