
Well, I guess I've been thinking too much, but this is how I feel right now. Please note that I only spent about 10 minutes writing this and that this is my first actual poem submitted onto a public site. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 06-11-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2530689
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The One For Me
The one I want most
I don't have
The one I love most
Doesn't love me back
You're the one
I need
But I'm not the one
You need
When I see you smile
A teardrop falls
It's not real
I realized it all
My love is true
My heart has broken,
Into two
Especially when I'm not with you
Every day
When you walk away
My heart breaks
And my body sways
As the truth beholds
What I wasn't told
I cry and weep
Until I fall asleep
When I look up to the sky
All I see are clouds,
The clouds we once saw
Together
But those memories
Are in the past
The memories
I wish would last
Yet I'm still
Walking alone today..
Because I just can't say
"I love you"
Even when I close my eyes,
For the very last time
You'll always be
The only one for me
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