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Big
Brother, they tore you away from home.
You had two months left to
live for free.
Enough time to marry your girlfriend,
Enough
time to say goodbye.
But not nearly enough time at all.
Big
Brother, they sent you to the heart of battle.
Lives were claimed
left and right in the never-ending fight for “freedom.”
One,
two, the skyline bathed in a crimson hue.
Three, four, the blast
shook them to their core.
Five. Five men dead in a matter of
months—from there the story nose-dives.
Big
Brother, they nearly killed you.
Running missions all day and all
night;
Sleep is a foreign thing now.
Lack of sleep creates lack
of attention.
Your group is attacked,
But you are the one who
is still in pain.
Big
Brother, they don’t care about us.
Wives driven to insanity and
hospitalized;
Siblings depressed, missing their other
half;
Parents plagued by worry that their son will die.
Families
become victims helpless from the pain.
Big
Brother, they’ve kept you away for a year.
Dates keep getting
pushed back, prolonging your return.
Still we fear they’ll send
you back again.
Will you finally get lucky and be allowed to live?
Big
Brother, you’ll never be the same.
You’ve seen the horrors of
death;
Your eyes have lost their twinkle.
Will we be getting
you back,
or just a shell of what you once were?
Big
Brother, we’re losing this war.
The casualties are higher than
they let on—
Soldiers die inside, the disease spreading to loved
ones.
War can only bring heartache and destruction.
Big
Brother, they did
kill you.
I watch you crying, though you don’t see me.
“It’s
my burden,” you tell us, refusing to talk about it.
You’re
crushed by the weight of the world.
A/N: This doesn’t make much sense, but I needed to write it. I went to an army family meeting yesterday. Boy, that went well. (Sarcasm)
Just one more month to go until my brother’s home though, hopefully more alive than I made him sound in this poem.
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