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Author: Razor to Rosary
Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Reviews: 1 - Published: 07-05-08 - Updated: 07-05-08 - Complete - id:2541012

Did I Just Die Or Were You Thirsty?

by Razor To Rosary


Thank you for saving me.

You’re all I wanted.

Could you pass the thorazine?

´Cause the of sight you now makes me nauseous.

.

Thanks for the drinks.

I really hated being sober.

I love you to pieces.

Seriously, I have an axe at home.

.

Leave me alone.

Leave me alone.

Leave me alone.

Leave me alone.

.

Thanks a lot, though.

I loved being your private lolly.

There’s nothing left in me now.

I’m not fucking Molly... Moon.

.

Leave me alone.

You fucking bastard.

Leave me alone.

Oh, Messiah.

Leave me alone.

You gushing excuse.

.

Seriously, get the fuck out of my room.

.

It was all nice and dandy.

I gave you myself,

You gave me a mirror,

And fed me all that spiked candy.

.

I wish it was with poison.

.

Will you please leave me alone?!

Leave me alone

Leave me alone

Leave me alone?

.

Thanks for saving me.

Gosh, you don’t need to remind me.

But does that really make me yours...

You’re nothing but a self centered whore.

.

Bitch.


A/N: Just a song that I felt like writing. It was written a few days ago and today I read it back and sang it to myself. I hadn't intended it to, but it turned out really mellow. It gets faster and a bit more aggressive in the 3rd and 5th stanzas. The last word is whispered. I haven't really edited it, just felt like posting it to get some thoughts. I appreciate criticism!

Thanks for reading!

Bárbara



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