
When we dance, I surrender. Because it makes us beautiful.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 07-07-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2542247
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je me rend
dancing
ought to be smooth
not ragged
serene
we ought to glide
across linoleum floor
like a ship
upon a sea of glass
but we don't
we stumble
falter
stepping on toes
more like a battle
against a gale
than dancing
a battle for the lead
for control
we stop
I close my eyes
feel the power
of my partner
his strong arms collecting me
supporting me
guiding
with silent suggestions
pressing my back
turning my body the way it should go
I surrender
bowing my head
I relinquish the lead
he suggests a step
I could
deny him
go my own way
shattering serenity
in an act of independence
but I don't
I follow
why fight for rights
for power
when his strength provides enough
for me as well
why unsettle
our effortless gliding
with a
rebellion
a demand for a voice
when his silent suggestion
makes our dance
beautiful
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