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When I close my eyes to sleep,
Deep inside I feel the memories moving,
And I think of the memories we keep
And will continue to share.
Closing my eyes
Opens a portal.
Through the portal I can see through the lies
That surround us.
When we met, you and I,
We made a pact, a silent deal.
To be there for each other until we die.
We would share our hopes, dreams and sorrows.
I see all of this way down deep
Through the portal
That opens when I close my eyes to sleep.
That happens, when I think of you,
My best friend.
ok, i made a few changes...they were needed, i have to admit. i want to thank the following reviewers who gave me a few tips, simpleplan13 THANK YOU FOR YPUR ENCOURAGEMENT!! TheWhateverFreak yea, um, thnaks...i think, and last but certainly not least, Kikyuu, thank you for pointing out the problems :P you all are amazing!!.And my computer hates me, soooooo...I HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!