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Author: FicWriterYK
Fiction Rated: K - English - Friendship/Poetry - Reviews: 3 - Published: 07-18-08 - Updated: 07-18-08 - id:2547235

When I close my eyes to sleep,

Deep inside I feel the memories moving,

And I think of the memories we keep

And will continue to share.

Closing my eyes

Opens a portal.

Through the portal I can see through the lies

That surround us.

When we met, you and I,

We made a pact, a silent deal.

To be there for each other until we die.

We would share our hopes, dreams and sorrows.

I see all of this way down deep

Through the portal

That opens when I close my eyes to sleep.

That happens, when I think of you,

My best friend.

ok, i made a few changes...they were needed, i have to admit. i want to thank the following reviewers who gave me a few tips, simpleplan13 THANK YOU FOR YPUR ENCOURAGEMENT!! TheWhateverFreak yea, um, thnaks...i think, and last but certainly not least, Kikyuu, thank you for pointing out the problems :P you all are amazing!!.And my computer hates me, soooooo...I HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!



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