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Author: AspiringWriter05
Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Reviews: 4 - Published: 07-29-08 - Updated: 07-29-08 - Complete - id:2552140

The Memory.

Constant images appear in my head.
A certain photograph imprinted in my mind.
Flashbacks of the past unable to let go.
Cannot forget and impossible to leave behind.

Memories triggered when day-dreaming.
Impossible to erase the history plaguing my present.
Conversations spoken floods into my subconsciousness.
Replays in my head of the years gone by, like a movie, of every moment.

Created scenarios of what I should have said and done then.
Distinct reminisces of what I once had, once knew.
The memory forever stuck in my mind,
My first love, lost, I'll always remember you.


Please post a review. I would really love to hear what you think of it and some constructive criticism to help me become a better writer.

I know this poem needs to be fix in some areas, so please tell me what I can do or if it doesn't need to be fixed...



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