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"Reciprocated Feelings"
When you hurt
I hurt too
When you’re down
I’m at the end of a bottomless pit
When your heart is broken
Mine is shattered into shards of glass; piercing my well-being
When you’re upset
All I can do is ache; waiting for your smile to return
And when that smile returns
It sends the very happiness down my spine; disguised as shivers and tingles
And when you tell me you love me
Those very words mend my shattered heart
Those very words send a ripple of joy throughout my entire body
Those very words send a bolt of elation towards my deepest core
And despite what you think
And despite what may happen
I will always and forever love you back
A/N: Hey people. I know it has been FOREVER! I'm truly sorry! First I had this huge writing slump but now that I'm back in school, and taking a writing class, my writing juices are flowing. I suddenly felt like writing a poem and I just wrote what I was feeling at the time. And this came about. Err...it's kind of about someone actually. But I won't say who. -is too scared/embarrassed to admit it- Mostly because it feels so mushy. LOL. But anyways, it took me a lot of courage to post this so please tell me what you think. If it's a horrible piece of crap I want you to tell me and give me a reason why. If you love it then let me know why too. I really want some feedback on this.
UPDATE NEWS:
The next chapter of Cliche To the Fifth Degree is in progress. No worries. In fact, I'm using the story as my 9 week project for Creative Writing. So expect a lot more updates coming soon. :)
That's all for now I suppose. Thanks for reading and PLEASE REVIEW!
J.S. Goldberg