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Author: J.S. Goldberg
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Reviews: 2 - Published: 08-11-08 - Updated: 08-11-08 - Complete - id:2557800

"Reciprocated Feelings"

When you hurt

I hurt too

When you’re down

I’m at the end of a bottomless pit

When your heart is broken

Mine is shattered into shards of glass; piercing my well-being

When you’re upset

All I can do is ache; waiting for your smile to return

And when that smile returns

It sends the very happiness down my spine; disguised as shivers and tingles

And when you tell me you love me

Those very words mend my shattered heart

Those very words send a ripple of joy throughout my entire body

Those very words send a bolt of elation towards my deepest core

And despite what you think

And despite what may happen

I will always and forever love you back


A/N: Hey people. I know it has been FOREVER! I'm truly sorry! First I had this huge writing slump but now that I'm back in school, and taking a writing class, my writing juices are flowing. I suddenly felt like writing a poem and I just wrote what I was feeling at the time. And this came about. Err...it's kind of about someone actually. But I won't say who. -is too scared/embarrassed to admit it- Mostly because it feels so mushy. LOL. But anyways, it took me a lot of courage to post this so please tell me what you think. If it's a horrible piece of crap I want you to tell me and give me a reason why. If you love it then let me know why too. I really want some feedback on this.

UPDATE NEWS:

The next chapter of Cliche To the Fifth Degree is in progress. No worries. In fact, I'm using the story as my 9 week project for Creative Writing. So expect a lot more updates coming soon. :)

That's all for now I suppose. Thanks for reading and PLEASE REVIEW!

J.S. Goldberg



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