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Crimson Paint
My first poem, so it's not the best of quality.
C/c is very much appreciated. Making words rhyme and using imagery, etc. aren't my strong points, so poetry is a difficult thing for me to create. However, I have all the emotions required for it, so it's something I'll keep working at (:
Her body a canvas for crimson paint
Her head feeling faint
A quick flash of silver
And she continues to paint
Her mind is in turmoil,
Her heart torn in half,
Body baring the brunt of her emotional pain,
As she lies peaceful in the bath
No-one to turn to,
When her problem is so taboo
And so she struggles on,
Acting happy for her friends,
Suffering alone
Her body a canvas of her pains