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Have you ever gotten that feeling where you have four great lines to a piece of poetry but you just can't think to write the rest? That's how I feel a lot. So, I created a collection of unfinished poems I started. They don't even have titles either. My collection is called A Series of Shorts. There is a total of 6. Tell me if any of them should be fixed or lengthened or if they are better being left short. Thankyou.
A Series of Shorts #1
Like the unseen wind
Traveling through,
You guide me in the direction
Of where I'm meant to be.
#2
A flock of seagulls
All alike
Flap their wings
So they can fly.
When a wing is broken,
One has two choices:
Lay on the ground
Or choose to die.
#3
One hot and muggy summer,
A boy with a magnifying glass
Burns a couple work ants to a crisp.
#4
Among great Fear and Hatred,
Destruction and Death.
Stuck at the bottom
Of Pandora's Box
Was nothing but
A little Hope.
#5
We give up because we feel as if we can't go any further.
We succumb to darkness.
#6
There is a box with no doors.
No ceilings, no walls, no floors.
What's there?
Not a box, not anywhere.
Note: #6 is suppose to be like a Dr. Suess riddle.