All grammar, punctuation, and awkwardness has been left as is. It pains me, but I feel that it's necessary to the effect. Enjoy, and please R&R. My friend has requested reviews.

On that note, this story and its copyright (moot point though that may be) belongs to Erich Dieziger.

This was a time where darkness ruled over the 8 great dynasties also known as the Element Islands. There was darkness, light, fire, aurora, lightning, ice, water and forest. Let us begin at Leaf Island where we meet Allen, the one who will save us all. His age was 11 and he had great potential of being a fighter. “Allen, get in this house right this instant. Mom and Dad are leaving for the market.”

“What, I can’t hear you, ha ha ha.”

“Get over here now!”

“Aw, sis, why do I have to come inside?”

“Because when Mom and Dad are gone, we have to stay indoors”.

Then there were three knocks on the door “Oh hello, Mister Zackeraya.”

“Oh, hello, children. I am sorry to say this, but your parents were assassinated.”

“What! No, why did you let them!”

“They wanted me to give you this.”

“Why would they want to give us their dagger and bow?”

“To be honest, I don’t know.” “But I will be taking care of you until you can be on your own, ok.”

“Ok,” said the children.

7 years later

“Allen, stop swinging that huge sword around. You’re going to hit something.” Crash!

“Oh, I guess I will listen next time.”

“That was my tree, grow me a new one.”

“Ok, ok, shish!” I used magic powers to cast a spell that makes things grow.” “Is that good, Mr. Zackeraya?”

“Yes”

“Hey, sis come out!”

“Ok. Why is there a huge tree laying on the ground?”

“I sliced it down.”

“What have I said about swinging that sword around? One of these days you’re going to hit someone!”

“Children come inside now.”

“Why?”

“Because I went into town and the Shadow Islands are sending troops over in 3 hours.”

“3 hours!”

“Now don’t be getting any ideas.”

“Sorry, I have to go to town.”

“Come back, Allen! Hmmm, Sara, go get your brother for me, I am getting old, and bring your bow. I told your parents that I would look after you when they died.”

“Allen, get back here now. Hum, what’s that?”

‘I don’t know, it looks like ships.”

“Help me, help me!” An arrow went into his back.

“They’re in the town!” Allen, get back here now!”

Allen got in town. 5 men approached him and they charged. Allen slashed his sword and wiped out 2, then one of the soldiers slashed at him. He blocked, then summoned 2 wolves. They attacked the guy and ate him alive. Then one of the soldiers hit him with an arrow in the leg and then stabbed the guy in the chest. The wolves disappeared and he planted a poison seed in his mouth and killed him. “Help!” “Awwww!”

“More men in town, got to go!” Allen ran to town. “There are 30 more men!” Allen started swinging his sword around in a circular motion. He hit six and killed four.

Allen saw a guy in a light blue robe blasting soldiers with aurora blasts. Allen ran up and summoned 6 wolves. They started to eat 3 soldiers.

“Who are you?”

“I am Z from the Mystic Island.”

“Oh.”

“Hey, you two are in violation of the law attacking an officer and interfering in a battle. Kill them!”

“Ok”

Z used an aurora blast and killed 5 of them.

Then the wolves came and started biting them. He slashed them with his sword, killing 2 and then he summoned a ghost of a samurai. It started cutting their heads off. Then a man in black armor stepped up with 2 soldiers as bodyguards. 3 wolves at one and his ghost slashed their heads off. Then the summons attacked him and he slashed and killed them all.

“Ha you think you can kill me with your pathetic summons!”

A rather abrupt ending to the chapter . . . fights urge to edit madly . . . but the point is that it's funny. Or at least I think it is. Do you? Please write a review!

If you liked it, there is more to come. It has several more chapters. If you didn't, go on your way and have a happy life!