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I wrote this a while ago. I don't know if I like the flow too much. It compares a flower with a weak stem to how we look at others. I'm open to suggestions!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Words: 86 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10-03-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2579459
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This is true, but I am not sure that it flows. I wrote this awhile ago. I hope it is not too bad...
We look at others,
As we do a flower.
The beautiful outside,
The leaves,
The bud,
But no the stem.
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What good is a pretty flower,
With a weak stem?
It will collapse, lean, and bend.
How pretty is it then?
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Don't just look on the outside,
Look in!
Don't just see what you want to,
See the true picture within.
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