Author: PoetryQueen PM
I wrote this a while ago. I don't know if I like the flow too much. It compares a flower with a weak stem to how we look at others. I'm open to suggestions!Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Words: 86 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10-03-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2579459
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This is true, but I am not sure that it flows. I wrote this awhile ago. I hope it is not too bad...
We look at others,
As we do a flower.
The beautiful outside,
But no the stem.
What good is a pretty flower,
With a weak stem?
It will collapse, lean, and bend.
How pretty is it then?
Don't just look on the outside,
Don't just see what you want to,
See the true picture within.