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Author: Aurora Corona
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Reviews: 164 - Published: 10-21-08 - Updated: 07-28-09 - id:2586854

Rules of Attraction of Testerones And Estrogen
Her seductive smile would be his undoing... It is a dark game which lovers play.
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 402 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-6-09 - Published: 2-6-09


The Dark Game Which Lovers Play


Her stunning azure eyes, fringed with dark lashes
Clashes with his hazel orbs
She flashes him a seductive smile
That would be his undoing.
It is a dark game which lovers play.

-x-

Unconsciously, he is drawn to her
Like a fly would be attracted to light.
Dangerous and deadly.

-x-

Smooth, auburn hair
Cascades down her shoulders.
He yearns to crush his lips against her
Full, cherry-red ones.
And he wonders,
how the curves of her body
Would fit so perfectly against his.

-x-

She beckons
He comes.

-x-

His hands disappear into her hair,
As he trails light kisses down her neck.
She grips him tighter, and a sigh escapes her
When his mouth reaches even lower into
Forbidden territory.

-x-

Darkness hides these sinful desires
Shielding naked, intertwined limbs.
Low moans and cries of pleasure are heard
As two bodies merge into one.
But when the sun rises, the
Light will cleanse all traces of
The dark game which lovers play.


A . N .

I think my bff blancei is going to have a spaz attack when she reads this.

This was a sudden brainfart on my part. One that makes my morality questionable, as I am hardly the type to venture into the wild, more... active side of Romance writing. And, might I add, I had absolutely no idea what I was writing or what techniques I used (zero), or even what the focus of the poem was. It was kind of general.

x* I added this to the stories section instead of the poem one because, in case any other ideas get tossed my way, I'd like to make this a sort of series. Everything (most likely) would be writen in a poem format, but it would tell a story at the same time. Comprende? :)

x* THE ABC'S OF JACK SANDERS CHAPTER 3 IS COMING THIS WEEKEND. It was a rather long wait, I know, and I apologise.


Reviews

Blancei 2009-02-06 . chapter 1

OMG! wow i never thought you'd write something like this! although i don't really like the, err, subject, it's a fantastic poem! i think it's even better than the one you submitted for voice, pity you couldn't have put this one instead! :P and you DID use literary techniques! like alliteration (dangerous and deadly) and imagery lol. so, great job! and no, i did not have a spaz attack :D i was merely surprised :P

Izzey 2009-02-06 . chapter 1

well written. i don't really know what else to say, but it was good. so, well done.



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