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Inspired by a conversation I had with one of my friends who had a scare with her fiance that is similar to what happens in this poem, minus the death. This poem is taking what happened one step further, following along the lines of our conversation.
Involves death and blood with depressing themes, sorry!
Dresden Lace
Life In Red
Look at me and whisper
Tell me all your thoughts
I want to know the secret
The challenge you have brought.
Footsteps echo gently
I turn and hide away
I apologise for hurting you
And leading you astray.
When they came to me
I was afraid of what to do
But I didn’t expect this
I honestly never knew.
Right now I know you hate me
And I know that’s just the start
But please don’t destroy me
Please don’t break my heart.
Do whatever you want
I am yours to kill
I shall let you cut through me
So that my blood shall spill.
But before you take that knife
And my heart you push it through
Do you think that you could tell me something?
Something I heard from few?
When you said ‘I love you’
Did you mean what you said?
Or was it all a lie
To get into my head?
If it was, then don’t dismay
It was what I just expected
But my love for you was different
My heart, you truly infected.
And they came, and took hold of me
Assuring me they were real
I should have trusted my instincts
But then, I couldn’t feel.
So then they took their dagger
And stabbed it through your heart
Before anything could be done
They took off in depart.
When I saw you lying there
I didn’t know what to do
So I took the bloodied knife
And did what I thought was true.
As our life in red
Slowly mixed together
I knew I had done the right thing
For we would be forever.
But when I get up there
And see you standing strong
Will I realise I was foolish
And did something wrong?
Would you still want me?
After I allowed them to kill
Your very being and life
So you would be forever still?
So that is why I ask you
And take your hand to plead
To say before you punish me
And make me eternally bleed.
Will you still love me
When I get to you?
But I guess it doesn’t matter
Because I will always love you.
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