|Can and Can't
Author: mate.feed.kill.repeat PM
Can't live with her, can't live without her.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12-02-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2603557
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Can't live with her
because she's cold,
Can't live without her
because she's the air that I breathe,
and my dreams when I sleep.
She's the blood in my veins,
and the food that I eat.
She's everything to me,
I'm still nothing to her.
a/n: I feel like I over-used commas because they're located at the end of lines where there is naturally a pause… Thoughts?