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Hi, peoples, it's meee. Just wanted to say a few things to those who've enjoyed this story:
1) I realize it's not perfect. Boy did I realize it when I re-read some stuff. My impression after months of not reading certain chapters is that Bekah's sarcasm sometimes makes "not funny" scenes seem... well, funny. Not good. LOL I also noticed that I repeat a lot of phrases and at times bog down with unneccessary description.
NOW- I understand that every writer has their struggles, so I'm not gonna do the woe is me thing. I'll be editing bit by bit as time allows, but the story will still say basically the same thing. Just better wording in some places, perhaps a change in tone.
2) If you're reading the sequel, Romancing the Rose, I want you to be aware that I'm tweaking Bekah's scenes a bit. Like I said, her sarcasim sometimes knocks a scene off balance, so that's what I'm trying to avoid. If she seems different in upcoming chapters, that is why, and I will try to iron the entire story out to match.
I am NOT saying that I'm changing her character. She is still tough and snarky. But I'll be losing that snarkiness in the "down" scenes. When she's sad or confused, etc. Just scenes where her witty remarks don't fit.
3) I would like your input on what I've said here . If you have a lot of negative say, I prefer it in PM, but don't beat me up too much, pretty please. THat just discourages me. Constructive criticism is welcome. If you just have general comments about this, feel free to review.
Thanks in advance.
Jen