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Unreal
Author:
LostInMe PM
Spur-of-the-moment poetry. I typed it up pretty quickly. Approximate rhyming.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Words: 56 - Reviews: 66 - Favs: 19 - Updated: 12-18-08 - Published: 12-16-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2609212
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Unreal

My eyes are open
But unseeing;
My soul is helpless,
Swollen, bleeding.

My lungs are tired –
Too much breathing.
My calm is broken;
I am beaten.

My anger fills me –
So much hating;
My ears are bursting,
Noises grating.

My eyes are closing,
Feelings fading –
My hope is vanished;
I am breaking.

I feel...
unreal.

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