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Burning Apart
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Oh I never took anything seriously My life seemed so easy. I forgot so easily But I could never imagine You would be ever gone. *please review*
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Friendship/Suspense - Words: 204 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12-20-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2610709
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Beginning Notes: It doesn't have a bridge. ((frown))

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(V1)

I feel so alive

I feel so free

That I want to say

I am alive.

I ignore the manful comments

I cry with the other's laments

Oh I never took anything seriously

My life seemed so easy. (I forgot so easily)

But I could never imagine

You would be ever gone.

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(Chorus)

Oh it burns my heart

So I try to replace it.

But I'll never try to forget

Oh it's burning apart.

I replace it with a fake smile

And some days it lasts a while

Oh it's burning apart.

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(V2)

I feel so hurt

I feel dead

That what someone said

And it really hurt.

I ignore the manful comments

I cry with the other's laments

Oh I never took anything seriously

My life seemed so easy. (I forgot so easily)

But I could never imagine

You would be ever gone.

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(Chorus)

Oh it burns my heart

So I try to replace it.

But I'll never try to forget

Oh it's burning apart.

I replace it with a fake smile

And some days it lasts a while

Oh it's burning apart.

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PLEASE REVEIW!

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