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here is my heart,
on a silver platter,
as you toss it to the floor
for silver does not matter
you wanted gold
with a shine in the bright light
like the searing flames
that tore across your eyes
i gave you what i could though
sweetheart...
this will have to do
as you fall
away from me
and i only fall through
your anger and your narrow mind
like a dollar maybe twirls
from a rich man of a some kind
if i cried ten thousand tears
and drowned in my remorse
you would not dare give a damn
would you, siren whore? fin
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may be continued possibly...i dunno...tell me what you guys think of this one and I'll consider writing another poem with similar subject matter...possibly the same narrator, etc., THANKS!