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Use Me, Abuse Me, I Love You
Kick before
You kiss me
Break my hand
When you hold it
Rip me open
Kiss it better
Pour salt on the wound
It feels so good
Hurt me
So I know you care
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I'm trying to practice my non rhyming poetry, so forgive me if this sucks. I have no idea what I'm doing. I wrote this while spacing out during church. How messed up is that?
Even if you think it sucks, especially if you think it sucks Review. Constructive criticism only please.