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Author: Mad Madam Mimm
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Published: 01-08-09 - Updated: 01-08-09 - Complete - id:2619353

Use Me, Abuse Me, I Love You

Kick before

You kiss me

Break my hand

When you hold it

Rip me open

Kiss it better

Pour salt on the wound

It feels so good

Hurt me

So I know you care

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I'm trying to practice my non rhyming poetry, so forgive me if this sucks. I have no idea what I'm doing. I wrote this while spacing out during church. How messed up is that?

Even if you think it sucks, especially if you think it sucks Review. Constructive criticism only please.



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