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Author: K.M.Mackenzie
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Reviews: 2 - Published: 01-16-09 - Updated: 01-16-09 - Complete - id:2622721

Looking at me

I am childish;
Spin me round.
Pick me up, don’t
Put me down.
I look at you,
You look at me
But what do you see
When you’re— you’re looking at me?

I am small.
And yeah, I wanna be tall.
I wanna be seen
The way you see me
But what do you see
When you’re— you’re looking at me?

Bring me back
To the start again.
Surprise the world,
So small I am.
Piece my heart
Whole again
Bring me back to the start.

I am here,
My heart is seen.
In rage and grace,
So small I seem.
But tall we walk,
Just you and me.
But what do you see
When you’re looking at me?


This is the first set of lyrics I've produced that I'm markedly proud of. That's why they're here. So, no, I'm not bleating "reviews reviews reviews", but I'd really appreciate some constructive feedback.

Cheers, Mackenzie



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