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What I've Made
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Pieces of broken glass,/sharp to the point,/Just like my heart.— Life Song. I think it's OK. You get to decide that by reviews!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Words: 111 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 03-07-09 - Status: Complete - id: 2644123
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Pieces of broken glass,
sharp to the point,
Just like my heart.

I crushed the old rose,
Let the red weed fade.
Where is my soul?

Laid it down on the dirt.
The pool of tears I made,
Drains into the soil.

Pieces of broken glass,
sharp to the point,
Just like my heart.

Pieces of broken glass,
sharp to the point,
Just like my heart.

I felt it there,
and it grew,
Look what I've made.

((I made a new heart.))


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For being the most recent constant reviewers!

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