The Safety of Flaw

Beauty is your only flaw

That purple violet

In the bed of blue

That one the little girl plucks

But you'll only to wither and die later

Suffocated

Thirsty

While all the others

Stay in the garden

Basking in the safety of flaw

They'll breathe

Drink the rain

Bask the sun

While you'll be lying crumpled

In her dainty fingered grasp

Reviews would be lovely, I'm having a difficult time deciding whether or not this was written well, or like crap. ;)

-Kaitrin