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The Angels
Author:
Thornprick PM
Their wings are breaking
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 03-27-09 - Status: Complete - id: 2652334
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Urg, I don't know if this poem is that great. Please tell me if you think it sucks.

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It burns and flairs with constant aching

A silvery fire

Angel wings soar ever higher

Their voices sing with deep desire

A silvery fire

How long can it burn

Angel wings soar ever higher

Will this ever stop?

How long can it burn?

Please sing a little louder

will this ever stop?

Their wings are breaking

Please sing a little louder

Angel wings soar ever higher

their wings are breaking

it burns and flairs with constant aching

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