Jumper

...

Jumping

From the airplane

Freefalling for minutes

Air rushing past

The buzz of the plane

As it flies away

...

Gazing down at the sun streaked view

Of New York City

The faint horns of Taxi's

The ant-sized people

Getting larger each second

...

Twisting the head

To view the partner falling

Signaling to deploy the chute

Partner first

Jerking in the sudden updraft

...

Pulling the strap

On the harness

To find it jammed in place

...

Pulling the second strap

To meet the same result

...

Tugging on the next strap

Ready to deploy the back-up shoot

And it jammed too

Both straps

...

Stranded in the air

Partner far above

...

Spinning closer to the ground

Only to meet the Empire State Building

...

Its spire touching the abdomen

Gravity finishes the rest

....

And how was it?

I edited the grammer, so it should all be in the correct tense now. This is after my friend pointed out my 'many' errors/issues. In person.

~Moony