
poem for Creative Writing. topic was "a party". had to be in couplets with an AB AB CD CD EF EF rhyme scheme. critique?
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Words: 119 - Published: 03-30-09 - id: 2653829
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"The Afterlife of the Party"
Staring in the mirror
Washing X's off her hands
She shouldn't even be here,
But she doesn't give a damn
She's hurting and she's bleeding,
Looking for an escape
Comfort is what she's needing
In any form she'll take
Hikes up her skirt; pulls up her tights
To give those gents what they so crave
Steps out into the flashing lights--
It's time to misbehave
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a/n: yes, there are three instances of allusion. no, I will not point them out because they are semi-obscure. yes, I will confirm that they are from Fall Out Boy, 3OH!3, and Cute is What We Aim For.
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