
a song i wrote! this is only my 2nd song so plz critique and give me tips!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Words: 226 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 04-13-09 - Status: Complete - id: 2659983
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Underneath the moon
You're standing there
No emotion in your face
Memories of this place
Park bench make out session
We had such aggression
Like a tiger on the prowl
When it's time for the wolf to howl
Underneath the moon
Why did our love have to end so soon
Underneath the moon
The love we shared was so true
Underneath the moon
Thinking about the things you said
As I was lying there alone in my bed
(You said) I love you
Those were the three words you used
And now you got me so confused
Underneath the moon
Why did our love have to end so soon
Underneath the moon
The love we shared was so true
Underneath the moon
The love that we shared was so strong
I thought you cared
But I guess, I guess I was wrong
I fell asleep
I dreamed of you
Dreaming about the things we went through
I don't understand
Why it didn't go exactly as we planned
We were gonna grow old together
By a motor cycle and some leather
We were gonna do whatever we wanted to
But now I think I've permanently lost you
Underneath the moon
Why did our love have to end so soon
Underneath the moon
The love we shared was so true
Underneath the moon
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