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Haiku
Autumn
Crisp leaves descending
Autumn clings to summer’s warmth.
Doomed to surrender.
Winter
Unforgiving ice.
On a bitter winter’s night.
Despairing darkness.
Spring
A chill spring morning,
All the grass shining with frost.
A mournful beauty.
Summer
A fresh breath of wind.
The warmth of an August day.
The dawning of peace.
--- Isilthrar
I've never really liked haikus that much. If a poem doesn't have a smooth rhythm or rhyming, I tend not to enjoy it. But it was an English lesson, I was very bored, there was a poster about haikus on the wall and I had my notebook with me. According to friends and family, this is a good piece, so... (shrugs) I hope you liked it. Review. Or don't, I suppose.
(floats away on a purple cloud)