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Author: Rayne S.Wolf
Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Reviews: 8 - Published: 05-09-09 - Updated: 11-09-09 - id:2671134

A.n: Holy crap 0-0 I have finally updating Thorn world =O sorry for the 4 month wait silent readers, well um.. This is my longest chapter ever and I will like to point out that my update plan is on my fiction press profile so look forward to the updates

Also I will like to recommend some stories on here that I have noticed here on this website too

Crescent moon nexus (by Luviant x; I’m his only reviewer on this story, so please help me out here =) he’s a cool dude)

Eden by Palm tree (^0^ my way of paying her back by telling others to read this story!)


Romancing Lucifer (Melissa Norvell)

And finally for now

Moon and the sun by SexyxXxKiss92 (New author on here and a sweet girl)

So now that’s done I hope you enjoy this long chapter 0-0

Episode 2: Revealing Dante

By Rayne s. wolf

Takemaru took a couple of steps after walking through the light purple curtain. His dull, emotionless eyes continued to see nothing but the semi darkness surrounding the cave and the light bluish-white icicles sharply hanging on the walls and rocks. He walked a little more until his blue eyes began to see a mine elevator towards the end. He opened the lower gate and went inside the elevator. The light started to blind his snake like eyes a little. Takemaru used his right forearm to cover his eyes from the light as he suddenly heard the elevator’s gate starting to close and begin to make the elevator lower down. Takemaru bended down to the floor level of the elevator and sat down in a kneeling position, then continued to wait for the elevator to stop moving.

A few moments later, Takemaru felt the elevator’s movement halted and the gate reopened again. He stood up and started to walk out of the elevator. As he walked a little more, a white and black castle like door appeared like magic. He took a step back with a little bit of fear in him, and then he turned back into his emotionless, military like self as the door began to widen the area between it and Takemaru. The door created pure white gothic like walls with black and silver rose like lace details on the bottom of the walls, and Sakura flowers paintings on the sidewalls. Unfazed, Takemaru position to the front door and heard the same female voice in his head

You have returned… Have you completed your mission Takemaru?” His eyes looked up at the ceiling and smirked. He took out his weapon; a 5-inch hatchet that had the black and silver rose detail on the metal parts and a dark blue soft handle. He answered with a confident teenage voice

“Fuck ya I did my mission boss, Let me in the door already. I’m getting fucking tired of waiting” The voice chuckled a little as it continued on

What your little mouth Takemaru, you must mature more before we face the greater battles. With out further a do,” the door clicked and Takemaru looked forward and put his hatchet away in his coat pocket

You may pass through once again Student: 004 aka Noriaki, Takemaru.” Takemaru opened the door as he mumbled in minor anger about his full name being used in a sentence.

x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.

Takuya continued onward to his house in silence and listening to the sounds of the wind, he looked back to where the cliff was located and chucked silently watching his brother and Dante continuing on in their conversation. His eyes turned back to the rightful spot and saw a light flickering just ten feet away from the hill he was walking down on. He looked at the light, and then noticed that it was Tatsuru’s lamp in his bedroom of the house. The house was middle size with rigid dark slate gray on the other walls, a light gray door and a few windows on the sides of the house. The roof was the same light gray color as the front door and on it was Ryu, Takuya’s other younger brother, lying on his back with a cigarette lit in his mouth. Takuya looked up and jogged towards the house.

“Ryu you fucked up idiot, throw away the cig now!” Takuya yelled as Ryu opened his pale green eyes and sat up from his position, he noticed Takuya standing at the front step glaring right at him in anger. He laughed and smiled at Takuya lightly

“Finally you show up Niisan! Tatsuru put your plate in the oven for ya,” Takuya groaned a little when Ryu stepped down and took out the cigarette from his mouth.

“I don’t care about the food, what the hell are you doing outside smoking? I thought I told you no more of it” Ryu grinned as he threw the cigarette on the ground and stomped on it lightly.

“I got bored dude, when you’re out and about; I got nothing to do but Torture Seki or sit on the roof and relax, it’s no big deal really”

“I’m fucking allergic to that smoke dipshit son and that whole smoking can fucking kill ya”

“You so gotta stop acting like a queer, at least I’m not doing it inside your bedroom.” Takuya took a deep breath to relax as he answered his brother calmly

“Please try your best to stop the smoking, I don’t want anymore deaths right now bro..” Ryu patted Takuya’s shoulders with his firm, strong hands and whispered

“Takuya I understand, don’t worry at all brother.” Takuya chuckled as he looked at Ryu’s face. Ryu’s face was similar to Takuya’s, but he had dimples and a slight bigger nose. He was a six foot 3 inch 16-year-old who had light curly reddish-brown hair, pale white skin and a great smile. He wore a dark silver tan top to show his muscular body, a pair of blue semi ripped shorts, and a chain over his left pocket.. The two laughed about their fight, and then started to walk into the house.

“Where’s Seki?” asked Ryu with a curious voice. Takuya froze for a minute to collect his thoughts about Seki and Dante; then he answered nervously

“Uh… He’ll be back shortly bro, are the others up right now?”

“Yeah, the others are up why you ask Takuya?” Takuya looked down at the ground as Ryu opened the door to the house, his eyes studied his face and began to worry a little.

“Niisan, you ok?” Takuya shook his head lightly and pulled a fake smile on Ryu saying

“Yeah bro I’m ok.” as they went inside the house silently.

x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.

Colette and her friend, “Kit-chan” transported their way to a wooden cabin deep within the night-shaded woods. Colette let go of the man’s hand and skipped to the cabin. The hooded man looked around his surroundings one last time before entering their humble cabin. His ears twitch a little as he began to hear a little song from Colette,

Oh shining stars guide me to my humble home,

To see my family again

With a plate of food, Oh how Yummy!!

Oh shining stars guide me through the night

To dream of a better tomorrow!

Colette jumped and cheered with a “YAH!” while her friend clapped and smiled at her purely.

“Lady Colette that was cute, though next time don’t try to wake your sisters up please,” the hooded man whispered and sweat dropped a bit. Colette took a bow and giggled as she answered back

“Oh right sorry Kit-chan, let’s head inside now. It’s a little cold out,” “Kit-chan walked up to her and picked her up with both of his arms

“I’ll keep you warm until we go inside then Lady Colette” He tightens his grip on her upper backside and her legs as Colette’s cheeks begin to form a small blush across her young face. She shuttered softly to “Kit-chan”

“Ari-ga-tō.. Kit-chan..” They smiled as he whispered back when they were walking to the house

“No need for thanks, I will always be here for you Colette-chan..”

x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.

Takuya sat on the average sized vanilla couch he and his brothers’ posses in their small living room of the house, finding his way to tell the others about Dante. He looked up at the tan ceiling and took a deep breath as he lied back on the couch

If I just say to the others “Hey everyone guess what? I have a spirit inside of me!” then they will be laughing at me in disbelief, but then again if they see me act like Dante, they will question my motives as always. Tatsuru and Kiyoto almost found out on me. Either way I’m so freakin’ fucked..” Takuya can hear the words repeating in his mind as he sat up to take off his dark azure blue sweatshirt, showing his slender, muscular toned body. He placed the sweatshirt on the right arm of the couch and placed his head gently on it, to relax more, and closed his dark chocolate brown eyes for a moment.

“Takuya Tsukiko Hideaki, please eat your dinner before I give it to Seki..” Takuya opened one of his eyes and begin seeing his twin brother, Kiyoto in a pair of dark maroon red pajama pants and a black tan top showing a lesser toned muscular body. He had the same sickly pale white skin like Takuya and the dark brownish-black eyes as him, but he had soft silky blackish-brown hair that was also somewhat spikey and curled like Takuya’s hair as well.

“I’m not hungry at all Kiyoto-chan, just put it in the fridge for me so I can eat it later.” Takuya answered softly as he sat up and stared at Kiyoto with depressed eyes. Kiyoto quickly noticed and sat down on Takuya’s left side to rub his shoulder with concern, Kiyoto then asked

“Is everything alright little bro?” Takuya continued to looked down on the wooden floor and whispered to Kiyoto

“I have a secret… I don’t know if I should tell you and the others or not..” Kiyoto nodded a little, trying to understand his brother as he went on

“Takuya, our family has a strong bond, no secrets. You are able to tell us everything so we can solve it together.” Takuya straighten himself and turned his head to face Kiyoto with the same expression on his face

“I want to tell you guys but I don’t know how you will react to it. I only told Seki about it”

“I see..” Kiyoto looked down with a sad expression as Takuya continued on

“I only told him because he has the ability to help me out figure it out.. And he and I have been best friends/brothers since he was a baby. I’m sorry if I made you upset bro” Takuya’s hand went to Kiyoto’s hair and he stroke it gently as he heard Kiyoto took a deep breath and whispered depressingly

“You didn’t twin, I understand about your problem.. I’ll get Keitaro and the other two to come in here, then when Seki-kun comes back; you and him can reveal this great freaking ass secret..” Kiyoto got up and started to walk away from Takuya as he felt small tears coming out of his sadden eyes. Takuya watched him and looked down with mixed emotions. His hands grabbed the top of his pant leggings and tighten his grip on them tightly. He felt water filling up in his eyes and he bended his head down to let them out softly.

Why won’t I let him know everything about me? He’s my twin brother for god’s sake.. Kikyo.. Aniki I’m sorry..” Takuya continued to tear up a little more as Dante phased in and floated right next to his young master. His eyes became full of concern and sorrow as he gently hugged Takuya.

“Master, what’s wrong?” asked Dante softly as Takuya quickly wiped his tears away and pulled away from Dante.

“Nothing at all Dante, Where’s my brother?” asked Takuya bluntly and quickly while looking away from his friend. Dante put his hand on Takuya’s back and began to rub it gently.

“He’s coming, but don’t worry my master I’m here for you forever.” His hand continued to rub slowly on Takuya’s back with each rub; he made it a little harder and sexually as his fingers started to caress and circle a few spots on his lower back. Takuya blushed deeply then turned around to face Dante’s mask, his eyes started; turning into a lighter, dazed like color. His right hand started to move toward Dante’s mask as he recklessly and roughly took it off. The mask dropped to the floor next to the couch as they stared into each other’s eyes sexually. Dante smiled as he gently lifted Takuya’s legs up and placed them next to his left side.

“You need to relax my sweet master,” Dante lowered his body to gently pressed on Takuya’s body. Dante put his hand underneath Takuya’s shirt and started to rub his stomach “Your so tensed up.. I wanna help you” Dante whispered sexually in Takuya’s ear while feeling his warmth increasing from blushing.

“But..” Takuya whined a little as he began to feel Dante’s teeth being pressed on his left ear. Dante placed his left hand on Takuya’s lips softly, but firmly and whispered back in a serious, yet lovely voice near his neck

“Shh.. No more talking Takuya-kun” Dante started to open his semi-covered mouth; revealing his whiten vampire like fanged teeth, then placed his mouth on Takuya’s neck. Takuya held Dante tightly as Dante started to bite his neck

“Oh.. Oh..” Takuya gasped softly as Dante continued on with his biting. Takuya moan and dug his nails into Dante’s back. Dante growled deeply and bit harder on Takuya’s neck.

“OH DANTE! MORE MORE!” Takuya moaned and squealed a little louder as Dante used his tongue to lick Takuya’s blood sexually. Dante’s left hand went down to Takuya’s pants and inside of them. Dante’s eyes widen a little and smiled

“Master, love you have cum.. It’s so warm….” He whispered as his lips pressed into Takuya’s lips for a kiss. Takuya shook violently in excitement and kissed Dante’s lips like a child. He sat up and leaped into Dante’s arms and whispered in his ear in a child-like voice with a smile

“Dan-Dan, I want more…” Dante smiled purely as he embraced Takuya in a firmed hug and whispered

“Anything for you my master” their lips touched and began making out. Their breathing became in sync as one warm, passionate breath; their opposing hands started to lock together. No one was around as they enjoyed the passion love between the two of them. Then out of nowhere

“ WOOOO HHOOOO GO TAKUYA!!!” the two of them both of them pulled away and Dante quickly grabbed his mask to put it on and adjust it. The two blushed deeply and saw Ryu and Tatsuru laughing at them together on the floor rolled side by side.

“Holy crap….” Takuya whispered as he lowered his face in depressed and embarrassment. Dante stood up as he watched his masters’ brothers laughing at Takuya. He walked up to them angrily and picked the two up with both of his hands. Tatsuru and Ryu looked at Dante’s masked as his light ruby red eyes started to glow darker.

“Don’t ever laugh at my master, understand!?” he growled as the two nodded quickly in fear

“Dude who the hell are you?!” Tatsuru asked fearfully as Ryu relaxed him self and said back

“Hiya I’m Ryu Inu Hideaki, what’s your name?” Tatsuru’s jaw dropped ten fold and screamed

“Ryu you are a dumb ass!” Dante giggled as Takuya and Ryu looked at Tatsuru with a confused face Dante placed the two boys down and pulled out his right hand towards Ryu

“I’m Dante, loyal servant to master Takuya Hideaki, I heard many things about you Ryu-san and you too Tatsuru” Ryu shook Dante’s hand and walked towards his black lounge chair to sit on.

“So Niisan, is this your big ass secret that Kiyoto was bitching about just now? This guy is cool so far,” said Ryu as he lit up another cigarette. Dante walked up to him and whacked it from Ryu’s hand

“No smoking!” he yelled as Ryu stared at him with doubt

“Ok never mind, Niisan I hate him already” Tatsuru walked towards the door to lean on it and cross his arms on his chest. Takuya sweat dropped a little as he stared at Ryu, then asked

“How much did you two see?” Ryu grinned as Tatsuru answered

“You two locking tongue and making out, why do you ask?” Takuya took a deep breath and thought

Thank god..”

“No reason, just wondering.. So where are now Keitaro and Kiyoto?” asked Takuya as Seki slammed the door open

“TAKUYA! DANTE WENT MISSING AGAIN!!!” The other’s eyes widen as they watched Tatsuru fall down on his face and a bump appeared on the back of his head. Ryu started laughing as Takuya and Dante watched Seki helped Tatsuru out, who was groaning in pain

“Ow…”

“Holy crap man I’m so sorry!” Seki cried out as he patted Tatsuru’s back very hardly

“Dude stop that god damnit!” Tatsuru screamed as he rubbed the bump on his head and got up slowly. Seki looked at Takuya then saw Dante

“Aniki-chan I found him!” Seki cheered on as Tatsuru went to the couch and lay down rubbing his head. Takuya groaned and whispered to himself in his head

Baka…”

“Find who?” The others focused their eyes to the new voice and then saw Kiyoto and Keitaro. Keitaro walked further to the guys wearing a white long sleeved pajama shirt with purple lighting marks on the sleeves over his slender toned body, a pair of black sweat shorts, and a walking boot on his right foot and cast on his left hand. He had the same hair color as Kiyoto but it was more of a black color and it was straight to the top of his firmed shoulders. He also had soft crystal blue eyes and the same sickly pale white skin as Takuya and Kiyoto. Seki quickly went to Keitaro and helped Kiyoto out with Keitaro.

”Niisans, I can go on my own..” Keitaro whispered as he looked at Dante with curiosity

“Are you sure Kei?” asked Kiyoto in concern as he watched Dante limp to the other lounge chair, which was the same color as Ryu’s chair, and took a seat.

“Yep, I made it Kiyoto now take a damn seat next to Tatsuru and Seki, go get some ice for Tatsuru’s poor head. That bump is growing on us and we can’t get him to the hospital right now.” Keitaro answered in a tender father like voice.

“Uh.. All right Keitaro, be right back!” yelled Seki as he ran to the kitchen. Kiyoto took a deep breath and sat down on the arm of Ryu’s chair with his arms crossed to stare at Takuya and Dante with minor anger in his eyes. Seki rushed in with a washcloth filled with a couple pieces of ice and gave them to Tatsuru.

“Again dude I’m so sorry” Seki said with hesitation while looking at Takuya and Keitaro. Ryu looked the others and said with a happy voice

“Time for the “big ass” secret!” Takuya, Dante and Seki looked at him widen confused eyes and Seki yelped a little as he went towards the other two with a cheesy grin on his face. Both Dante and his master smack their faces then said to Seki

“Queer” Seki chuckled a little and said back

“Shh don’t tell them my secret yet, it’s not my fault I love cock so much” the brothers laughed as Dante blinked in confusion as he whispered to himself

“How does someone like a rooster? I wonder now about him..” Dante looked up at the rest of his master’s brothers and smiled nervously. Keitaro cleared his voice and spoke in a soft voice to Takuya.

“Takuya-chan, explain who Dante is now please..” Takuya looked down as Dante rubbed his back again. Takuya took a deep breath, cleared his voice and started to speak in a serious tone

“Everyone, Dante here is a spirit..”

To be continued…

A/N: X-X I have died! 8 fucking pages 0_0 I have never typed anything longer than this, this is a new record for me xD So um, Please review and I shall review back. Um.. Also Ambezuai and SexyxXxKiss92 I will reply to your PMs soon

Also one more thing, I will be posting a new story soon call “Vampire Symphony” I know it’s a random idea, but then again I’m a random person! 0-0 ok… um.. Bye for now!!


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