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Max, giving a violin lesson on Tuesday
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For my current love: 'Thumbing my cell phone, not impatient, just impartial to movement when I hear such a succulent sound.'
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 123 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 05-09-09 - Status: Complete - id: 2671164
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-1Max, giving a violin lesson on Tuesday
Sharp child-fingers twist
around the bow;

Max says: softly, delicately

words that this child
hardly understands yet,

from behind, he taps
the beat, worn out
sneakers thump, thump

a consistently steady rhythm.

Arms, fold under child hands,
guide.

There, there, he says.

I am watching from the corner,
thumbing my cell phone,
not impatient, just impartial
to movement when I hear
such a succulent sound.

There's a shaft of sunlight
falling into the middle
of the room from the glass
in the door.

I watch it. It separates us.

Use your wrists, he warns

stay with the measures, don't
loose the tempo.

I wonder, if we have children
will they be virtuosos?

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