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Author: Vanyalli
Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Reviews: 2 - Published: 06-09-09 - Updated: 06-09-09 - Complete - id:2683266

quiet

confusion
yelling
tension
a quiet lament is heard from the corner
sniffle
whimper
silence


This is kind of blah. I was bored. Yes, there's not supposed to be any capital letters. I like it so far, but I feel like there should be more. What do you think?



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