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Scarlet Night © Rachel Morales, 2008-2009
Warning: I retain full and exclusive legal rights to this story, its plot-line, and the characters within it. Unauthorized publication or duplication of this piece is prohibited. Actions of the previous nature will be prosecuted.
a/n: okays, so this is my first Original piece. I would appreciate actual feedback on this. Pretty Please!
You gotta read past the Prologue though. This might be in poetic form, but there are actual chapters after this, lols!
Prologue
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Death…
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The eternal shadow of humankind’s existence.
Man’s ultimate worry and fear.
Life’s ultimate end.
I have never truly feared Death, no matter how imposing a presence he was in my life.
Though Death has taken from me, I have nothing but respect and gratitude for his work.
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Weird?
Maybe.
Most likely.
But, that is how I feel.
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Death…
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The thief of all that is precious.
Man’s ultimate enemy.
Life’s ultimate result.
I have lost my most precious person to his hands, but still, I don’t think I could ever fear him.
Though Death undoubtedly stole her from me, his thievery has changed me indefinitely.
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I had always depended on her to light my life.
I had always depended on her strength to survive.
I can stand on my own now.
I can use my own strength to protect us from the troubles to come.
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Death…
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The bringer of strength and independence.
Man’s ultimate teacher.
Life’s ultimate driving force.
I have never feared him, but I will always be aware of the power he holds.
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Because,
Though his theft has changed my life completely,
I would have never come into my own without it….
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TBC
a/n: so this is my first original story...please let me know what you think