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Author: steffxnie
Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Reviews: 5 - Published: 09-03-09 - Updated: 09-03-09 - Complete - id:2716797

Lovesick

Doctor, I am sick.
This feeling...
feels so strange, yet not so strange,
seems so familiar, yet not so familiar.
What is it?
I don’t know...
It just feels right and not right at the same time.

Doctor,
Thinking makes me dizzy.
I know nothing anymore.
Life's not as easy as it seems, after all.

Doctor,
building a castle doesn't help.
It gets swept away every time,
and leaves me defenseless,
like my room without a door.

Doctor,
brother says resting helps,
but I'm so tired of sleeping,
dreaming constantly.
The switch for the lights is broken,
maybe I should do something?

Oh! Doctor!
Do you think I should be a painter when I grow up?
This world is becoming more vivid than ever.

Doctor, can you cure me?
I think I'm a teeny lovesick.


Notice it's written in a child's perspective.
Imagine the girl tilting her head in curiousity!

Review, pretty please? :D



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