we burned though the scene like a house on fire.
(taking, having, still wanting. m.o.r.e.)

we talked in tongues (twisted them up on the couch).
where we told our stories, shared our lies.
(it would be better if you just said it.)

you permeated every vital organ in me,
but I am not ill. and I prefer to keep
all my empty parts, unfilled.

and we were all well and good,
up until the alcohol ran dry.

(don't come back)