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Author: Stebbins -Stella-
Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Reviews: 7 - Published: 09-29-09 - Updated: 12-04-09 - id:2725688

Hi, this is my first story on this site. Please be nice and if you like/go on fanfiction then check out a few of my stories on there, same name with a couple of stories, lol. I hope you enjoy it and please review if you like or have any suggestions.

This story is about a boy who is just normal like everyone else, until he moves away and finds himself in a world he isnt used to.

If anybody has any ideas I would love to hear them but I am pretty sure I know what plot I want to follow.

Thanks! Hope you like it! Please review! I will update as much as possible! The more reviews I get the quicker I will update!

Bold Italics are me explaining/talking.
Italics are memories.
Normal is just the story.
Bold is chapters.


Chapter One: The Move

I was happy at my school. I was liked at my school! OK I wasnt popular and I did get bullied by the odd one or two people but I has friends and teachers that liked me a lot. But now my dad was making me move. He had gotten fired from his old job and my uncle offered him a job at his work, so now we need to move more than six hours away! It wasnt fair that I had to say goodbye to all my friends, it wasn't fair that I had to give up my clubs just so dad could re-start and it definatly wasn't fair that I had to do whatever they said without question.

My dad wasn't one you said no to. He was very big, long thick arms with legs to match, and thick short combed black hair, deep dark brown eyes. He is very strong its scary and he has a light five O'clock shadow. He wore glasses when he had to read which he liked to do, he also went to the gym every week and sometimes took me and my brother and sister with him. His full name was Michael (Mike) Antony Stewart. He was fifty three years old but very fit for his age, his parents died not long after he was eighteen and he had to rely on his only other family, his older brother Ryan.

Mum was just as excited to go as dad was. She had friends here as well but she had always hated it here, we lived in a street with drug addicts and alcoholics. She had always wanted to move away but we never had the money and even she didnt want to move away just like that, she thought it would be rude to her friends but now we have an excusse she didnt need to feel guilty about it.

My mum was one of the nicest women you could ever meet. She had long light brown hair and hazel eyes to match. She was ever so thin, except for the bump forming where the new babies is, and tanned as well with long black flashy eye lashes and soft light pink lips, she had rosy cheeks and skinny arms with long nails and a hairless body. She didn't work, just stayed home and looked after the house... oh... and the baby on the way, mum was pregnant. Mum did excersise as well, she always had but she likes to do it now so the baby stays healthy too. She wants another girl so she has two girls and two boys. Mums full name is Lily Suesan Catherway Stewart, she kept her last name but also took dads name, mum is thirty years old. Mum had three brothers (Eric, Dave and Henry) and two sisters (Lola and Sara) as well as both her parents but she didnt speak to any of them after she had run away at sixteen.

My older brother was the most unhappiest. He had a girlfriend here, he was most popular at school, he was on the football team and all the teachers loved him to bits when he was at school, he left a year ago but when he picks me up they all love seeing him. He didnt want to go and he was down right refusing, but dad was going to make him. Dad could make us do anything he wanted. But then again, my brother was as stubborn and strong as dad.

My older brother was big with a thick body just like dad, he had dark brown hair and brown eyes, he was strong and the eldest of us all at seventeen. He was very handsom, charming and talented, he had big brains and was one the most talented at sports. His name was Kevin (Kev to his friends) Heckna Stewart. He was loved by everyone, I might be jealous of him if I didnt basically adore him, he is my roll model and I do every and anything to be like him, only I suck at sports and I am not smartest in my class, plus I dont have a girlfriend. Kevin's girlfriend is one of the most beautiful teenagers I have ever seen even if she is a snob to me and everyone else.

Sister was almost as excited as mum and dad were. She was not popular at school, she had two friends who she wouldnt miss one bit. All the teachers would miss her and so would most of the adults but she didnt care, she couldn't wait to move somewhere new.

My older sister was tall and skinny, she had pale skin and freckles with dark dark brown hair and green eyes, she wore a pair of purple glasses and has small finger with bitten nails, she was one of the smartest girls you could ever meet and was the one most bullies by people. Her name's Kimmy (Kim) Anna Stewart, she's fifteen. Her hair was often tied into a pony tail or plates. Dad is forever trying to get her to get muscles or be braver but she would much rather be working or reading or playing with animals. She loves animals more than this family sometimes!

Oh I almost forgot to say. My name is Lewis (Lee) Paul Stewart and I'm only thirteen, was twelve only a few weeks ago. I have thick black hair but managed to convince dad to let me have bright blond high lighst. I am small for my age and very skinny, no matter what I do I cant put on weight, mum says its unhealthy and even dad insists on taking me to the gym so that I can work out and build some muscles. I have kind of tanned skin but not much and mum says I am cute but I don't feel it, if I was cute how come I dont have a girl!

Anyway, back to the story, it was my last day, I wake as normal in my bunk bed and push my red and blue checkered covers back and sit up, I wear a plain white top and boxers to bed. I climb down my ladder and stand beside my sleeping brother for a second. Then I grabb my school clothes and go into the bathroom to change.

My bathroom is a pretty average room, it has a square bath and sink beside it, everything is crystal white and so is the toilet, we spent yesterday cleaning everything. There is a soft blue carpet by the toilet and one by the bath.

I pull off my shirt and boxers first, then use the small towel to wipe myself down, then I pull on my new boxers, my black socks then my blue trousers and then I buttoned up my white shirt and grabbed my trainers, my school shoes were in a bag but I liked to jog to school. My blazer is hanging up down stairs with my hoody which I wore under my blazer. When I am dressed I grab my comb and gell and do my hair so it hangs just over my head like a hat, only more spiked. Then I go down stairs.

Dad is sitting in the living room with a newspaper, egg and bacon. Mum is in the kitchen cooking for us all. Kim is flipping through the TV, she is already perfectly dressed with a book in her lap, she wants to find some music to listen to while she reads.

"Lee?" dad looked over at me, I looked around "Sure you dont want a lift?"

"I'm ok dad" I answer shrugging

After that I go into the kitchen, mum smiles at me and asks what I want. When she has made me my cerial I eat quickly and grab my bags, I packed it before I went to bed last night, so with a final kiss on mums cheek and a pat on the back by dad I head out my bang hanging from my shoulder. I am wearing my white hoody underneath my blue blazers. My bag is a pale brown hanging from my shoulder.

I begin to jog, soon I find myself running, eager to get to school as soon as I can. In no less than fifteen minutes I have made it to school. My friends were waiting for me by the gates.

"Hay mate" said Matt "Last day"

"Yeah" I grumble

They each give me their numbers for my cell phone and talk almost imediantly changes to school related stuff. It feels like a normal day at school. But I know really, its my last.

*****

School drags like hell, mostly because I have everyone coming up to me and saying goodbye, I would like it but its just not the right people, its all the weird kids and nerdy ones, no one cool comes to chat with me or say goodbye, no one I want comes and says they'll miss me.

It may sound snobby and mean to those people that were nice to me but I dont care, that is how school life is, if you cant handle it then you cant handle life itself.

Teachers come and say goodbye, one even wimperes but she cried when someone lost a tooth, others just give me a half hearted wave to me. That is about all the notice I get.

Since I am invisable to quite a lot of people I have time to day dream. I day dream were killers show up and take over the school, were Raven Krabbs (the girl I have such a crush on) coward in fear and then I come. I have supernatural powers and fight off the bad guys then Raven falls into my arms and we kiss. Then dad shows up and tells me that we arent moving after all and everyones so happy we all cheer and-

"Lewis!" some snapps and I jump, Matt is standing over me with Daniel and Glen, all frowning "Come on its time to go! Everyones staring!" he hissed

I looked around and saw that everyone was looking, some were at the door but most were just getting out of their seats. I must have been mumbling a little loud in my day dream.

"What was I doing?" I asked as soon as I managed to push past the laughing crowd.

"You were cheering..." Glen scowled "Like... loudly... everyone looked around and saw you just before we woke you"

I blushed and walked off, I had a habbit of talking in my sleep. I was teased all the way until the bell finally went for home time after my little goodbye thing were everyone took my picture and we even had cake, it wasnt all bad but it did make me feel horribly sad that I would no doubt never see them again.

At the end of the day I walked out of the gate and saw dad waiting to give Kim a ride home. I was so depressed I didnt want to jog so insted I went over to him and asked if I could ride home. He smiled and opened the door for me, dad could probably tell I was depressed, he probably thinks it because I am leaving but even if he didnt think he knew it he wouldnt ask. We have a strong relationship were he lets mum do the sensitive junk.

After I had climbed into the front seat I rested my head forward and watched all the kids walking home. I dont know half of them but I still feel like I am going to miss them all. I bury my face and think of the last impression on my last day of school. The weird kid who cheers in day dreams. I felt like a prat! No worse! Prats can make up for what they did, I cant, I feel like a bloody Skum bag here!

I heard the car door open and close and looked back to see Kim reading as normal. Dad climbed in and started the car, I brought out my phone, flipped it open and went through some of the pictures I had taken over the years at this school with some of the last minute ones with us all together. I stare at my face, if you just stare I look happy with my friends, but if you look closley you can see the forged smile. Suddenly I get a call, its an unknown number and I frown. As it put it to my ear and listen I talk quietly.

"Hello?"

"...zzz...zzz..." it said, suddenly with heavy breathing. I frowned and shivered then hissed.

"Who is this?!"

"...z....z...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz" it was so loud I had to take the phone away

"Lee? Whats going on?" dad asked

"Wrong number" I say hanging up and shoving my phone back into my pocket

I lean back as Kim reads her book and dad drives listening to the radio. My last time I look out the window and watch all the houses and streets and fields and everything. I wave goodbye and dad catch dad smiling sadly at me. Dad takes me around all of the place so I can say goodbye to everything.

I wave goodbye to the town with the shoe shop, clothe shop, toy shop, book shop, anique shop, horror shop, valantine shop, the dentist, the optitions, plant shop, doctors, the costume shop, even the christmas and machine shop. I wave to the football fied, the park and the activity center. I wave to my best friends house and the largest place to shop ever, the galleriar. I wave to mums hairdresser, the make up department, the pet store, even just the car park. I wave to my church and to my favourite park were I can usually go out and skates. And finally I wave goodbye to every street we pass.

Then finally we are back home. When asked dad says we are leaving just after we have had tea, just to make sure we have everything needed. I nodd and climb out of the car, Kim follows, head still in the stupid book, when I look at the front cover I see its a Romance Novel about two people from different contries who havent even actually meet until the end.

"You're home! Good! I need all your help in getting Kevin's things packed and putting them all in the van thats coming any second now!" Mum said the minute we stepped in the door.

"Lil, we arent going until later after tea" Dad frowned

"Oh no, we beat traffic in this case! No I have packed sandwiches, crisps, biscutes and a few jam rolls so we can eat on the way there!" Mum said

Kim sighed and said "I will get the bags into the van but I refuse to touch Kevin's underwear"

"Ok fine, Lee you go clean up while your father and I take the heavy things and Kim helps put all the lighter things into the van"

"Dont be silly mum!" Kim gasped "You're pregnant, I'll help dad you get the little stuff"

"She's right Lil" Dad smiled and pecked her cheek

I roll my eyes and go upstairs while they all laugh and giggle and act like Kevin and I dont exist. I know mum and dad dont mean to do it, but fact was they always wanted girls, maybe one boy but girls always came top, they never told me but I Kevin told me that he heard them saying they only wanted one little girl but mum kept getting pregnant and she didnt have the heart for abortion.

I knock on our door, I dont have to cause its my room too, but I always have and always will. Kevin mumbles something and when I go in I see he is flicking through the TV.

"Time to get packed" I say

"You already are" he smirked

"No, I mean you" I say

"Come on Lee, you dont want to go!"

"Yeah but I dont have a choice! You gonna make me go with them lot on my own with a baby on the way. Please Kev come on, I'll do your side of the work when we move in"

"I dont mind the work" he shrugged

"Then what is it? I know it isnt Alison, she's a whore" I snapped

"Maybe its just that I dont want mum and dad to control me my whole life"

"Then dont let them! Come for me! Please!"

Kevin looks up at me and I put on my best puppy dog eyes. He sighs and shruggs "Sure, why not? No big deal"

He acts cool but I know that he cares for me. That is why he is doing it. But I dont mind, as long as he is going and isnt going to leave me behind.

So we pack up. First I get his suitcase and pack his favourite clothes in, then I get an old box and he helps me put the clothes he isnt so interested in. I then get another box and bubble wrap and we wrap all of his valuable things in and careful back them off. Then I help with him the bigger things that need to be disasembled. Pretty soon all his things were packed up and he was ready to go.

"Come on, lets get this stuff downstairs, their probably got all the things packed already" Kevin said

I grinned at him, glad he was coming and we made our way down the stairs. Mum was waiting, she gave Kevin a big hug when she saw he was coming as well. I smirked as Kevin made gagging faces over mums shoulder. Then dad came in saying it was time to go.

*****

"Quit pushing me!" Kim snapped

"I am not! Your big butts in the way!"

"Lee! Dont say things like that! And will you all stop shouting!"

"I'm not shouting!" Kevin snapped

"Now you are" Kim said and I shoved her, making her drop her book "You lost my page!"

"S'not like you're not gonna re-read it as soon as we get to the new house" I rolled my eyes.

"Enough!" Dad shouted making us all jump. He looked back and watched as we silently pulled on our belts "Now then, have we forgotten anything?"

"No" Mum said "The house has been stripped bare"

"Alright then" Dad smiled, breathing hard "We are off"

And we were.

*****

"Fifty-nine, sixty, sixty-one, sixty-two" I counted

"Would you shut up!" Kim snapped

"Now you made me lose count!" I snapped and stared out of the window again "Now then... One, two, three, four, five..."

I had spent the last half an hour just counting all the red cars I could see. Kim was still reading, almost at the end of the book, well until I lost her page. Kevin was asleep. Dad driving and mum listening to her CD player to sooth the baby who was feeling sick. I had the feeling it was mum who was sick not the baby.

"Give it a rest now Lee" Dad snapped

I scowled but slipped down and kept my mouth shut. Soon I saw a sign saying that there was a resturant later on and asked dad if we could stop there. He thought hard and then sighed saying sure, we were all sick of the food mum pact especially when I ate mine while we were jogging and stopping and bumping so I was sick all down myself. Dad shouted at me and Kevin shouted at dad and mum shouted at Kevin and I shouted at mum and mum shouted back at me. Then mum burst into tears, I screamed I hated the family and ran right out of the car, would've gotten away if we werent in traffic. I ran and almost got hit when dad grabbed me and moved me out of the way. I am so shaken and scared he doesnt even tell me off. When we got back he had us all count back from ten with ten breaths in between so calm us down, said it was stressful and no ones fault.

I watched out for the resturant even though I knew dad wouldnt miss it. Dad didnt, when I saw it, I saw it was a fancy resturant with a red roof and brown walls, a big sign that read 'Count Down' I stared up at it before shaking Kevin awake. Kim got out of the car as soon as we were packed without setting her book down. Dad told mum and soon we were all stretching our legs.

"Come on" Dad grins

Just as I was about to follow them all inside I stopped and felt my phone vibrate. I told them I would be in a second and flicked open my phone and put it to my ears, the caller was unknown.

"Hello?" I said

"...zzzzzzz...zzzzz...zzzzzzzzzzzzz...zzz..." came a voice

"Who is this?!" I snapped "Whoever you are you have the wrong number! I-"

"Turn... ack... yern... ack..." a fuzzed voice fuzzed

"I dont know who you think you are. But stop calling before I use the phone to call the police!" I snapped and snapped it shut.

I stormed in to the resturant and looked around. I spotted my family at a large table accompanied by another family. They all seemed to be getting along. There was a grown man, dark red hair, tall and tanned. There was a grown woman with long bright red hair, tall, skinny and smiling widly to show bright pearl white teeth. There was a small girl, a lot younger than me, maybe six... five... something like that, who was bugging Kim as she tried to read, she had her dads hair and was slightly chubby. And another girl, maybe just a little older than me if not my age, who was sitting, looking very bored as our parents spoke to eachother. She had firey red hair with blazing emrald eyes and freckles, she was tall and tanned but skinny.

"Lee" Mum called "These are the Russon's" she nodded to the family "This is Kenny" she said to the father "his wife Mosley" she said to his wife "And their daughters" she pointed to the youngest "Ashleigh, she's only four, isnt she big for her age, and.." she nodded towards the bored looking girl "This is Lucy, she is fourteen only a year older than you. This is our youngest son Lee, well Lewis but everyone calls him Lee ever since he was a baby" God I should have known she would be excited over two daughters, probably jealous of them.

"Hi" I gave an awkward wave

"Hello lad" Kenny grinned

"Nice to meet you" Mosley said ever so delacatly, she was posh... I hated posh, and so did Kevin whom I realized wasnt here.

When neither of the girls said anything I looked up and asked were he was. Mum answers suddenly looking annoyed "He went to the bathroom after being incredably rude to Lucy"

Lucy rolled her eyes and grumbled "Nothing I couldnt handle"

I make to go to the bathroom as well but dad grabs me and makes me sit down beside Lucy. Ashleigh squeals and claps her piggy hands together happily. Kim looked ready to use the book she was holding, as a weapon for the first time in her life, she hated it when we hit each other with her books, said they were not toys and we could break/damadge them.

We all order our own food, it was oily and greasy and made me sick to look at it, I missed mums food. The Russon's lived near us, they were coming back from a holiday, there were not any tables left and they overheard mum saying to one of the guest that they had travelled so far to get to the new house, they asked and then when they heard they offered us a seat with them. Lucy wasnt too fond of this and I found myself watching her when my phone went off again.

"Lewis!" mum snapps, she calls me Lewis a lot when we have company "Turn that bloody phone off!"

I grumbled and flicked it open, it was a text message: 'Turn Back'

"Uhh" I growl and delete it

"Who was it?" Dad asked

"I dont know, someone has been calling me and pulling a prank I think" I grumble

"Is it one of your mates?"

"Calls unknown" I say "And they wouldnt make a joke last this long"

"hmmm, just ignore unknown calls from now on" Kenny suggests

"Probably best" Dad nodded, smiling.

I delete the message and shove my phone back into my pocket. Mum scowls at me then resumes coversation with Mosley. Dad chatting away to Kenny. Kim trying to read with Ashleigh grabbing at her book and asking questions. Kevin still in the bathroom. Finally Lucy and I sitting there sulking over the stinking food.

Soon Kevin finally comes back. He squeezes between me and Ashleigh who begins to cry that she is squish. Mum then makes Kim put her book down and set Ashleigh on her lap. Kevin snickered and elbowed me in the ribs and I grin at him. I hear a snort and look around to see Lucy glaring at me with pure hate. I blink at her.

*****

"Can I go to the bathroom before we go?" Lucy asked

"Ok honey just be quick" Mosley said

"I need to go too!" I said quickly and without waiting premission I run off after Lucy. I hear mum snapping after me but I ignore her. I hope I can catch Lucy before she goes into the girls bathroom.

Luck is with me and I catch her just before she goes in. "Lucy! Wait a second!" I call. She looks back, frowning. "I need to talk to you a second before you go"

"What do you want?" she snapped

"Why are you so annoyed with me and Kevin?"

"Kevin was a twat!" she spat "I know his kind, and I know your's too! Do whatever you can to be cool!"

"Thats not me" I say hurt

"Yes it is, I saw you with your brother there!"

"That wasnt being cool... That was us teasing our sister, we always do that!"

"Yea right" she snorts

"Cant we start again? Please?" I ask, I dont know why I am trying to be her friend but for some reason I am drawn to her

"...Were are you gonna live now? What's the address?"

"fifty craw-fod road" I said, I memorised the address not long after mum had told me we were moving, almost like the more I knew were the more I could understand why.

"Really?" she squealed eyes bulging

"Why? Whats wrong with it?"

"Nothing... nothing" she smirked and raised an eyebrow "Oh... except the last three people who lived it that house died shortly after, but I am sure you'll be fiiiiiine"

Before I could respond she had already gone into the bathroom and left me gawping after her.

*****

I didnt go to the bathroom. I knew I should or else mum will be even more annoyed with me but I figured if I saw she was too mad then I could always say I went quickly or I could make her feel guilty by limping and saying someone attacked me and I just got away. I knew she wouldn't believe it, but she would pretend to in front of company. I wont tell her what Lucy said. I think I will tell Kevin, even dad or Kim, but not mum, she would blame me somehow. So insted I go back to the car where everyone is waiting for me and Lucy.

"Did you go?!" Mum snapped

I open my mouth to lie and say yes, then shake my head "No... Some kids were smoking and I got creeped out by this girl hanging around it" That wasnt a complete lie. Lucy is a girl, she was hanging outside while she spoke to me, and she did creep me out. And there were a few boys smoking, they may have been outside but they were smoking.

"Well at least you're smart enough to stay away from them boys" she says and hugs me, kissing my cheek.

"Uhh! Mum!" I say, she just smiles and gets me in the car, she says she will catch up with the Russon's as soon as we are settled into the new house.

I climb in the side and let Kim sit in the middle, she isnt happy about being between us but she told mum and dad that when she is beside the window, all the flashing images distract her. I stare out of the window as we start driving. Cars sometimes pass us because dad doesnt trust driving fast when he himself is slightly tired and soon the Russons pass us. I see Lucy smirking at me through the window and scowl at her. I look ahead to see if mum is asleep then, when I see she is, I speak to dad.

"Is the house we brought haunted?" I ask

"Haunter?!" Kim snorts "Dont be stupid! Of course it isnt!"

"Yeah Lee, what made you say that?" Dad frowns into the mirror.

"Well... That girl Lucy... She said the last three people died there"

"Dont listen to that cow" Kevin said "She is all huffy because her parents wont spoil her like they do her sister"

"Its just... She seemed pretty sure"

"She would do, you dont listen to her Lee, she is just a girl with temper tantrams" Dad said

"So... The last three families didnt die then?"

"...Well..." Dad says awkwardly

"For gods sake!" Mum snapped and we all jumped, I am sure we all thought she was in a deep sleep "Lewis! The first lot were drug addicts and smokers! No wonder their hearts gave out! The second were killed by a phyco murder who admited to it, and he's locked away! And the last lot had some sort of ilegal gass leak that made them go mad! The drugs and smoke is gone, the murder is locked away and the gass was taken care of ages ago! Now be quiet!"

"How do you know all that?!" I frowned

"They told us when they sold the house" Mum sighed

"How do you know that it all happened like that, the ghost could have done that to hide it!" Kevin smirked

"They could have!" I cried

"Now look what you have done Kevin!" Mum shouted "Stop winding your brother up! And Lewis there is nothing there!"

The way she said it, we all knew that it meant that was the end of that conversation, mum used to be one of the kindest, her Hormoans with the baby were acting up and she was almost as snappy as dad was. When she spoke like that it was the way dad spoke when they ended something. But I sat back and glared at the back of her seat. Kevin was snckering now and Kim rolled her eyes as she continued to read. I stare back out of the window glare. They never listen to me, they always think I am being silly or something because I am the baby and I cant wait for the real baby to be born so maybe they will start to take me at least a little seriously.

I didnt realize how much time passed as I began to day dream, nor did I realize how heavy my eyelids were growing. I don't notice until Kim pulls her denim jacket over me. I give a weary smile and let my eyes close. Kim can be an alright sister at times... At times.

*****

"Lee... Lee come on... Wake up" Came a voice

I moan and open my eyes. I am in nothing, everything is black and the floor I am lying on feels like jelly. I frowned and slowly stand up. I blink a few times and see I am completly naked! I yell and look around but no one is here. I am breathing hard as if I have been running but I have just woken up, maybe I had a nightmare.

"Lewwwwwis!" called a voice so suddenly it made me jump

"Whose there!?" I snap

"Lewwwwwiiiiiiiis" It called

"Whats going on?!" I snap, shaking

"Turn Back!" Screamed a voice and I screamed myself.

I begin to run on the jelly floor when I feel it collapsing beneath me. As I look back I see it is falling in and underneath is fire, red hot fire, burning every step I walk on. I scream and continue to run but know I cant get far!

I am still screaming, the voices echoing in my ears, then I see someone ahead of me. Lucy Russon. I scream and run at her, suddenly angry, suddenly wanting to cause her as much pain as I can but I am not sure why. But just as I am about to reach her, just as I am about to tear her to shreads... I hear my name.

Someone is calling my name as I am seconds from reaching Lucy. I stop and realize the floor has stopped collapsing. I look around, its all stopped, no one is here, Lucy disapeared... Whats going on!?

Then I hear my name again and everything shakes around me like an earthquake!

What is going on?!?!?!?!

*****

"Lewis! Lee, baby come on" it was mums voice calling

I moan and open my eyes, everyone is out of the car except me. I roll my head and groan as I sit up. Mum is beaming at me, it is clear whatever they promised of the house, they delievered. I sit up and climb out of the car and look up at the new home.

"Welcome home kids" Dad chuckled.


TO BE CONTINUED...

Ooooooo, so Lucy knows about the house.
I know how it feels for your family never to take you seriously because you are youngest and it sucks!
If you want you can vote on what the baby should be, a boy or a girl, or even if she should miscarry. Whatever! Give me ideas! Read and Review! Help me! Hope you enjoyed it!



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