Author: eaststar PM
Even though it's pretty personal, I don't mind any criticism. So go right ahead! My first serious poem on this site!Rated: Fiction K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Words: 57 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10-06-09 - Status: Complete - id: 2728375
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You probably wouldn't understand what I mean in this poem because it has something in it that's a bit personal to me. It's pretty short... Oh, and REVIEW.
What is truth but an irreversible lie?
My future and hopes all lain down to die.
All from the fantasies of an eight year old mind,