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Tearing Me Down
You tore at me
Cut me deep
And while staring at the wounds
Laughed at my weakness
You hurt the core
Stopped only short of killing me
And after I said I was injured
You kept going
To fuel your own pain
You ripped my hert
Took as much as I was willing to give
Kept all the best parts
And disgarded the leftovers
You burned my flesh
Held the fire to close
And set me ablaze with
Pleasure and with anguish
You beat me at this game
I didn’t know the right moves
My novice mismatched your expertise
And I crumbled in defeat
You tore at me
Dug deep enough to leave a scar
And while staring at the wounds
Stepped over the smashed ruins
MS 10/15/09