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Author: Phoenix743
Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Published: 11-03-09 - Updated: 11-03-09 - id:2737415

Story: Forever Entwined

Chapter 1- Prologue

Warning: This story is not recommended for immature readers so don't say i didn't warn you, its a bit angsty and there's going to be murders...

Summary: The first bit of the story will seem loving and cheerful but trust me it'll al be 'blown away' literally... The first chapter is a bit confusing but it'll all be explained in the upcoming chapters. Now this story is gonna be about this 13 year old professional assassin that has been raised in this evil organisation since she can remember with no memory of her previous family. At a very young age she already had tainted blood on her hands and was forced to kill, at least that's what she always was taught to do. To kill. But on the inside she feels empty as if something's missing but doesn't know what. Our lovely assassin will show up in chapter 2 sorry for the wait, chapter 1 was to show how evil this organisation can be by destroying such a loving family. All source of goodness is crushed by them. (and you'll also see the Davidson siblings with grandma in chap 2!)

This is my first story on this site so reviews to help me improve my writing are always welcome. But other than that Review! Review! Review! (i guess i made it pretty obvious i like reviews lolz)

Chapter 1

The sun shined on a young lady in her twenties, she had light brown hair that reached her shoulders with a few curls and light brown eyes that at the moment were practically smiling. She was wearing a light peach dress with no sleeves that reached her knees and a peach over-all cotton jacket at a darker color than the dress.

With a serene smile on her face she was lightly pushing and pulling her one year old twin girl’s cradling bed with light pink sheets and a lilac mosquito net placed above them. The light swaying seemed to be more than enough to put the little angels to sleep. Well they were angels now that they are asleep because whilst awake they’re like little monsters.

“May I help you, ma’am” one of the many servants asked Lady Davidson.

“Anne, how many times do I have to tell you, you can call me Alison” she chided with a kind smile on her face than she continued “And no thanks I’m managing”

“But that would be disrespectful Lady Davidson and very well I shall continue my work” and with that the elderly woman left the room.

“Mommy! Mommy!” a five year old boy with dark brown hair and eyes which he got from his father. He was wearing plain dark blue trousers and a light blue tee shirt.

He came running from the hallway screaming for his mother.

Alison got quickly worried afraid something has happened to her first born “What’s wrong, Daniel?”

With a big grin he told his mother whom looked like was about to get a heart attack at any given moment “I was watching a TV commercial about this toy-car and its really really cool so could you buy it for me?”

She was almost about to fall over and after a few minutes of processing what he just told her whilst twitching her left eye she responded “Daniel don’t run in the house like that you give people the wrong impression and you could get hurt”

The young boy pretending to listen he murmured “Ahaaa…” than he continued more excitedly “So are you going to buy me the car Mum”

“Forget it sweetheart we’ve already had to turn the guest room into a room were you can stuff all your toys in since your room is already full we need to put a stop to this” she said whilst crossing her fingers behind her back hoping her son wouldn’t ask her again and she’ll cave.

But lady luck wasn’t on her side today “Put it in twins room than it’s not like they use much anywayz” he suggested slyly.

“Just because your sisters are too young that doesn’t mean they don’t deserve a nice room WITHOUT their brother’s toys in it” she said more determinedly.

“Well one last car will fit in the guest room, than we’ll put a stop to it”

“That’s what you said last time but you can just forget it you won’t make me buy you another car this time” Alison said stubbornly.

“Awww… come on mooommmy…” the boy whined and on the inside he started giving himself a nice pat on the shoulder while a victorious smirk plastered on his face.

The person in question’s face softened.

‘One more try he thought’ he thought “Pleeaaase… moommmy…” he pouted and his eyes started shining so much that made him look like an angel that fell from heaven.

At that point whatever rational thinking Alison had was gone “oh fine, I’ll go get my credit card” and she left her daughter’s room and went to her own.

A few hours later

Alison was sitting in an armchair in the living room facing the front door. She was knitting a pair of socks for one of her twins than suddenly she heard the front door click and begin to open.

She quickly dropped what she was doing and sprinted over to the pot of tea she had already cooked up and left to stay warm, in a matter of seconds she poured the tea in a mug and raced for the door so fast without spilling a drop that would even make a professional athletic envious.

Exactly as the door fully opened the brown eyed beauty made it there with the mug of tea and a “Hello dear”

As soon as Mr. Davidson noticed this he quickly deducted and said “I guess this means you fell for the ‘puppy dog eyes’ again and bought him another truck huh”

“How’d you know, Max?” she asked stupidly as she handed him the cup of tea.

“It’s not that hard to figure out especially since lately every time I come home from work I always find my beautiful wife waiting for me with a cup of tea in hand. Honestly I think my bladder is becoming made solely out of tea”

She smiled apologetically at him.

“Alison how many times do I have to tell you to stand up to that kid” he chided his little wife with a hint of humor as he kissed her lightly on the lips and followed his wife in the house.

She quickly changed the subject “So any interesting lawsuits I should know about?”

The lawyer answered “Well I managed to convince the judge to convict a professional assassin again but it’s no use there won’t be an end to this unless the one who hired them is caught”

“Don’t put yourself down honey, I mean this is the thirteenth assassin you got convicted that’s got to count for something” she said and than she saw him smiling smugly at her with a twinkle in his eye which she promptly asked a “what?” for.

Which he answered “Nothing it’s just you would have made a lousy lawyer negotiating like that”

She swiftly hits him on the head making him clutch his head in pain for a few seconds before he pulled away his hand to save whatever that was left from his ego and watched as ‘his rose’ made her way to the nursery to feed their daughters and dress them along with Daniel so that the entire family like every Friday they’ll go to the usual restaurant.

‘Rose’, He loved calling her ‘his rose’ because she’s exactly like that flower mostly she appears like a nice, innocent little lady but in truth you should watch out when she blows a fuse because she can be as harmful as the thorns on the lovely flower.

Once they were all ready they got out and into the car. As usual they went to the same expensive restaurant while the children play in the play pan with others their age.


With the children

Amy, one of the twins she has dark brown hair and eyes which she also got from her father. She was wearing a light pink long sleeve shirt with a light blue sleeveless shirt on top, dark pink tights, pinkish jeans skirt that reached her knees and light pink ballerina shoes. (yeah I know too much pink but hey what do you dress one year old girls other than pink)

Amy was at the moment wrestling a six year old boy for a truck. The boy was stronger and appeared to be winning but Amy pulled a dirty trick and fired a water gun in his face which made him rub his eyes and in those few moments she quickly grabbed the truck hit him on the head with it and went to the corner to play.

Angelica, the other of the two twins had her mother’s light brown hair and eyes and she was wearing the same outfit as her sister since they’re twins and they could easily be telled apart by their hair color because their faces looked exactly the same.

Angelica was playing a card game with a few of her friends and had just won the third game.

The others were talking amongst themselves and speaking in awe about Angelica’s skills.

That’s when Daniel interrupted and told her “Woah this is the third game in a row you won” than he added slyly “What’cha doin’ dating Lady Luck or what?”

Ignoring the supposedly bruise to the ego she made sure no one else was listening and said “you call it luck me call it cheat. Oh and speak of dating I hear you adore Edith over there” she said with a smirk on her face referring to a girl with extremely high pigtails, braces that in a freaky way seem to ‘glow in the dark’ kinda like a horizontal Christmas tree, round glasses large as cart wheels and for a reason no one knows why she always, each and every passing second needs to blow her nose its no wonder even her shirt on the front has a huge pocket.

Poor Daniel’s jaw dropped and yelled “Take that back!” and no sooner he screamed that every eye in the restaurant flew at him making him shudder under so many stares making Angelica giggle and give a victorious smirk.


Now the entire family was back in the car and they were taking a shortcut through a forest. The parents were both seated in the front and Alison was holding Daniel since he’s too hyper to be left alone at the back and the twins are at the back in their car baby seat pretending to be asleep in hopes of skipping tonight’s medicine.

Than suddenly Daniel could have sworn he heard a beeping sound which made him eep and drop the ball he was playing with “I heard a beeping sound and my ball fell” he muttered.

The parents over looked that as nothing and sent the boy for the ball while they wait in the car. After a couple of seconds the twins opened their eyes and Amy suggested they go and she’ll play a prank on their big brother since Angelica’s already had her chance at the restaurant which Angelica quickly agreed to and tagged along. Soundlessly they made their way out of the car and since their parents thought they were asleep it was pretty easy.

They quickly found him and Amy shot him with her water gun so much he looked like a wet duckling and Angelica laughed at the scene before her which her brother frowned to.

“You two are in big trouble when I tell Mommy on you” and he raced his way to the car, both sisters widened their eyes and raced after him.

Angelica managed to reach him and caused them both to trip on each other and whilst on the floor Daniel heard the beeping sound again and looked towards the sound and what he saw under his parent’s car drained all color from his face, he may be young but he was a pro at these things and according to what little he knew that thing under his parent’s car was a …an exploding thingy! (that’s what he calls a bomb)

“Mum! Dad! Get out! Boom! Boom! Out!” in all the panic he couldn’t make out full sentences.

Their parents looked towards them and that’s when…

BEEP! BEEP! 3! 2! 1

Their parent’s serene faces were the last things they saw before the fire devoured them. Daniel fell to his knees and cried while Angelica still couldn’t believe she lost her Mommy and Daddy “Mommy! Daddy!” she yelled, her vision blurred as tears formed and she sprang herself at the car on fire with her arms wide ready to hug her parents.

She nearly made her way towards the fire still not wanting to believe any of this and she needed her mother to hug her and tell her everything will be alright like she used to but suddenly with her arms still wide open she fell flat on her face mere centimeters from the still burning car.

Her still crying brother noticed she was about to practically throw herself in the fire and gathered what little energy he had left to grab her ankles and make her trip but his hands seemed to have frozen in place because even after he tripped her he didn’t move a muscle and continued to sob in the soil and it’s a good thing he didn’t let go because his stubborn sister was still struggling trying to reach the car, her face was bleeding from the nasty fall but she didn’t once move her hands and hold her aching face.

The one year old ignored her pain and with tears streaming down her face she continued trying to reach the inevitable. Completely ignoring the fact or not wanting to believe that no matter how much she reached for those people she sought comfort from were gone and there will be no coming back. She continued trying to reach for what she can’t get a hold of and completely forgetting whom she still had, no matter the pain he’ll continue to hold her, and save her because he won’t let anyone else die on him. Like his parents.


At the police station

Daniel and Angelica were sitting near a social worker whom was assigned to help them recover from their trauma but wasn’t doing a good job since none were listening to her and instead were trying to protest to the officers.

“It appears the car crashed in a tree and it blew up with three passengers still inside” an officer reported to his superior.

Daniel sat up abruptly and yelled “Me parents didn’t crash there was exploding thingy on car!”

The officer which reported earlier scratched the back of his head and looked apologetically at his superior as he said “Yes well this kid keeps insisting there was a bomb under the car”

“Did you investigate this theory thoroughly?” his superior inquired.

“Yes sir but we found no evidence of their being a bomb. True there are bombs that are small and have special chemicals to make the bomb itself blow up along with the rest without leaving a trace behind but it’s highly expensive and somehow I doubt anyone would go to all that trouble just to kill a lawyer, a housewife and a one year old little girl”

Before the boy had a chance to protest his still petrified, little sister beat him to it when she heard her twin being mentioned “Me sis wasn’t in car! She NOT dead!” she screamed and then collapsed in the social worker’s arms to continue crying.

The superior now asked “Is it true? Did you find her body?”

“I’m afraid not sir but since the child was too small we didn’t expect to find much anyway so we’ve deducted according to the children’s story while Daniel and Angelica Davidson were playing fetch Amy Davidson went back in the car and died along with her parents”

“But the children deny this too?” his superior asked once again.

“Yes they claim that they never saw her enter the car but as the orders were given six squats were on the look- out for Amy Davidson within thirteen miles from the scene, a child her age couldn’t have gone any further than that but she was not found anywhere so she must have died too”

“I see, have you notified their family?”

“Their parents were practically the only family those children had left but we managed to locate a widowed grandma from their mother’s side she’s the only family they have left now. She took full responsibility and is on her way to do the necessary paper work and take them home with her”

The social worker was getting annoying so Angelica continued crying on her brother’s shoulder as they waited for Grandma Agatha to come pick them up from the police station.

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