Hey guys!
This is a preface of a story I'm thinking of doing, but I would really loke your opinion.
So read it through and tell me what you think.
:)

Preface

(Brittney's POV)

"Oh, I hope he is sooo fit! English will be so boring if he isn't" Clare said, staring dreamily at the ceiling.
"He is super fit. great arse, amazingchest." Kayliegh said, her eyebrows moving up and down as she spoke, "He is so fine!"
Everyone on the dinner table sighed - including me - only I sighed because of the chose of topic, while they sighed because of some teacher. I think it's plain crazy to be honest!

Today is the first day back from our 2 month holiday, and a lot of things have changed. Our year class has only 30 students left now out of 190 - this is because us 30 passed out GCSE's - and many old teachers have retired. Meaning, fresh meat! Four teachers have left, three out of four new teachers are women, but they are fairly old too, so the boys are not happy. The fourth teacher, however, is a very young man, just out of uni - or so we're told - and every girl is becoming horny over him!

"Brittney, you have been quiet. What do you think?" Lisa said, turning to face me.
"You want to know what I think!?"I asked sarcastically, "I think that you all nuts. He's a teacher to start off with and when have any of you listened to a bloody thing Kayleigh has ever said?!"
Everyone was quiet, before Kayliegh gave a 'humph' and got up from the table.
"Well I'm sorry Brittney, but not everyone can get lucky with their boyfriends. How many have you had? Oh, yeah, none."
She turned around and walked away. Everyone began to mutter under their breaths.
"Don't listen to her, she's a cow." Lisa said
"Yeah, she's such a cow! Everyone hates her, so why don't any of you tell her so?"
Everyone looked around, looking at each other. For some reason, they didn't know what to say.
"All she was on about was the new teacher." Jade mumbled.
"For God's sake! He's a flaming teacher! Even if he is a total looker, you could never have him! So just drop they bloody subject and leave it there. Do any of you even remember what i was on about before hand?"
"Umm... sorry Brit."
I sighed, "It's the first day in 6th Form and she's already pissing me off, God why did she have to come back!?"
"Don't worry about her, just focus on your studies. So what did you say before 'The Cow' came over." Claire said, a massive smile on her face.

"You were on about how you had the most boring time in ICT." a male voice came from behind me.

What do you think? I know it's short but it's just a preview.

If you don't live in the UK -
GCSE's are exam that we take at the age of 16, once we take these exams we don't have to go back to school - ever.
However, if you want to get a good job and go to uni you have to go back to school and sit AS level's at the age of 17 and A level's at the age of 18. (When you go back in to school you are in the '6th Form')
ICT is 'Information Computer Technology - it's just working on the computer and learning on how
This is important to the story.

Please Rate this to tell me what you think, and if you have any suggestions on how to make it better please feel free to tell me!
Beth x