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Author: boredenuff2dothis
Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Published: 11-07-09 - Updated: 11-07-09 - Complete - id:2738967

Feeling piss-ass drunk;

she takes better care of you
then a worthless wisp of dreams and fuck-ups

like me ever could.
I whip out art and force it into
retard(red) formats and rhymes

for you I imagine it helps, but it's lacking

in substance.

I just want to take you out into the city, into the stars
I want to give you the beauty I found in you

slowly I am dulling your edge

faster I am crushing your spark

immediately, you trust me.
Turn me over;

I'm scared of falling forwards

of seeing the ground
before it leaps up and smacks me in the jaw.
before it bearhugs the life out of me.
Feeling lethargic

her opinion will always outweigh my own
lucky for you her biting wit has created something greater than

the sum of us.
(you)



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