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Author: edwards-gurl123
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-08-09 - Updated: 11-08-09 - id:2739284

Hey! I got this idea for a story from my own life and I just tweaked it a bit to make it more interesting. This is the prologue so tell me what u think and if you like it I'll keep writing. I don't know how it's going to end since I don't have an ending yet in my own life...actually I'm just at the beginning...but i'll probably change it alot anyway.


I was 14 the first time I saw him. Shaggy blonde hair, blue-grey eyes and a smile that was so contagious you couldn't help but smile back, no matter how you were feeling. It was impossible not to think he was gorgeous. All my friends fell for him immediatly, but he paid no attention to any of them. He only paid attention to me.

He told me I was beautiful and that any guy would be lucky to date me. Then he asked if he could be that guy. I turned him down. I told him he just wasn't my type. He accepted it and moved on and within a week he was dating my friend, Jennifer. I was happy for him, but I knew that deep down, he still wished she was me.

When I told him I was dating his friend, Steven, he congratulated me, but I could tell it was killing him. After that, we didn't see eachother as much. I was always with Steven and he was always with Jennifer. We drifted apart. We forgot about eachother. That is until school started again...

So....what do you think? I'm on too so check out my stories. (mostly twilight:P)



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