
| Lonely Road
Author: Iceyrose141 Poem about how a person went from the Lonely and dark, cruel road to the road of friendship. Plz review.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 01-26-10 - Status: Complete - id: 2768772
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Iceyrose141: I just finished reading a graphic novel (manga) and I wrote this poem because this was how the main character felt. just to make this clear IT IS NOT HOW I FEEL AT ALL!!!
please tell me of any careless mistakes I made and not noticed. :)
The Lonely Road
The Lonely Road
it's so familiar to me.
The Lonely road ends in a depth of despair.
The road of friend ship and family reject me
calling me an outcast.
No one really cares
whether I live or I die.
I come to the end,
the beginning of the abyss.
I drown in the abyss of despair.
I cry and plead for someone to save me.
when I think I'm about to be drowned by the despair,
you come and save me from this lonely road.
I now have a new road,
that I do not travel alone.
The lonely adn treacherous cruel hating road,
is now in the depth of my past.
The lonely road is hard and cruel,
please have no one more to travel it
like me.
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