
| Imagine a Faintly Shining Light
Author: thenewzerov This is a poem I hadn't completed. Decided to go back and finish it, although now I think it has a different feel than when I first wrote it. Thanks for any reviews. thenewzerov
Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance/Poetry - Words: 136 - Published: 02-11-10 - Status: Complete - id: 2774169
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Imagine a faintly shining light,
That sweeps the land on a cloudy night,
And casts a ray of hope to one,
Whose journey has left him where he had begun.
As before, as much as I now care,
The easier it is for my heart to tear,
I know you love me, with all your heart,
But I begin to doubt, the longer we're apart.
You're faithful, you're honest, and yes, you're true
But even the honest can tell it's thru;
It only takes words to break a heart,
And it's even easier, the longer we're apart.
And now I'm left, where I had begun,
On a cloudy night, with hope for none,
With a ray of faintly shining light,
Showing the way to love's next blight.
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