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A poem dedicated to my past subscribers on previous websites
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 02-18-10 - id: 2776843
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Rude, You break me down with your harsh words

instead of listening to my heart speak. No one on

earth could shut it down better than you could. I

couldn't believe you could do such a horrible thing

to a female's heart especially mine like that. You

hated my stories for no apparent reason because

you refuse to appreciate my talent. All I wanted for

you to give me was positive and constructive criticism.

Your comments were as bitter sweet as my heavenly

dawn. Offended, I couldn't keep holding on to serenity

and unity in our imaginary world. According to you, I

was a mentally retarded and ugly swan. I didn't

understand how you could judge me if you have

never seen my beautiful face or walked in my shoes.

I may be an ugly swan, but I still have my dreams and

screams.

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