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jellyfish
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the sun softly smiles PM
call me Aurelia aurita - you can look all you like, but touching is done at your own risk.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Words: 105 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 03-09-10 - Status: Complete - id: 2783781
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because Camille Saint-Saƫns' Le Carnaval des Animaux is amazing, particularly the Aquarium movement.

also, this poem feels like it's not quite finished, but I just keep hitting a mental wall whenever I try to do anything with it. sigh.


Listen, can you hear it?
beautiful, haunting, drawing you in
to a world you can never fully enter.
so I pretend I'm full of mystery and
foreign-accented smiles.

I trill a lilting laugh - soprano and silken,
and shoot you a look with my best
dark-diminuendo eyes;
you stand still, dumb,
unresponsive, and
my allure is all in my head, I suppose.

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