
A poem inspired by e. e. cummings. I played around with parenthesis, and I really like how it turned out. Reviews would be lovely.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance - Words: 154 - Reviews: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 03-11-10 - Status: Complete - id: 2784403
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3/10/2010
"Unspoken, (until spoken)"
By: darkdreamerx
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Our bodies entwine again, and
yet, I am not satisfied (like you
would believe me to be). There was
nothing lacking, no sensation (of
unexplainable) missed; why then, does
my heart (filled with tender lists not
even, a pen of infinite ink could write)
feel incomplete in such this way
(a way that defines the question
of questioning)? Our eyes meet,
remnants of fire burning (that closed
lids would not obscure) and I witness
the answer (of all unanswered answers)
into my ears; entering my mind
(first, then trailing its depth inside,
across veins) gently, to the place of
inquisition... (where, my heart swells)
and peace (not the kind of peace after
war) but, sweet peace, entrances me. I
felt your lips upon mine and still,
I became (where I repeated the sounds
your beautiful voice made, in my head),
and was then, satisfied (willingly; blissfully).
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