
He smells just like Juicy Fruit and Marlboro, and smiles like some sunbaked tomcat
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Words: 261 - Published: 04-19-10 - Status: Complete - id: 2798643
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A/N: My teacher woke me up in algebra and told me to be more productive, so I wrote this poem. I've been musing a lot with country scenes, and I imagine this story being told with a sort of soft Southern drawl. I struggled with the ending, as I usually do, but I still like the outcome. Enjoy.
My Tomcat
I don't wish at 11:11 anymore
Because I find myself wanting my old boy
He smells just like Juicy Fruit and Marlboro
And smiles like some sunbaked tomcat
That little crooked grin
He used to stay up late every night
Just to wish upon the clock
But as he was my favorite fool, he never said
What it was he was wishing for
Instead trying to make me laugh
Taunting me with his desires
But deep inside I'm not so sure
He knew what he wanted either
Like he was walking always on blanketed stories
That never had an ending
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So he left me for the road that morning
And I watched his fluff of red hair
Bob daintily on the horizon
Until the tears brimmed up so high
I couldn't tell the difference between
The boy I love and the country apple sun
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Now when a bright star dots the sky
I open my heart and wish for him
(The stars always mimicked his eyes, anyways)
And that maybe, just maybe
He found what he was looking for all along
Only to realize that his true treasure
Was back home, looking at the sky
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