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A person watches a beatiful sunset. They don't whant it to go, but it does. I'm going to add another, revised version. I'd love it if anybody would be willing to read them both, when I put it up, and tell me if it's actually any better :D
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 91 - Published: 07-06-10 - id: 2825526
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Sunset
I stared at the lake, and the colors in the west.
I stared at the red, purple, and blue.
I stared at the beauty of the sunset.
Though I was getting cold,
I was to captivated to move.
The colors reflected beautifully off the lake.
I watched as the wondrous sunset slipped further, and further, into the west.
I didn't want it to end,
But soon enough the beautiful sun fell behind the lake, and all went dark.
Plz review. Flames are welcome. Signed or anonomous reviews are welcome.
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